 KeyblademasterA 2010-01-07 . chapter 28Yay! You updated! I've been checking in all week because we haven't had school. Stupid snow! Update soon |
 R-Lord 2010-01-07 . chapter 28 I've finally, finally caught up. The fillers were a pretty fun read, a good change from dense... dense... so very very dense Tolkien.
Oh oh, and the dive into the darkness with Sora and Kairi distinctly reminds me of a certain Final Fantasy 7 scene.
Also, slight typo here
"...Sora, Roxas, Axel, and Riku in their karaoke band, and they didn’t even know how good Riku, Tidus, or Wakka were." Riku was put twice |
 finalflash1992 2010-01-07 . chapter 28very entertaining chapter...didn't really get the joke with the candles, but that could be cause i don't get out enough v-v thanks for uploading |
 SirAngelo 2010-01-07 . chapter 28After Axel's little performance, I would say the girls will be hardpressed to get my vote. And here I always thought he would be a terrible singer...
And yes, the Jump Fiesta trailer makes you rethink everything you thought you knew about Kingdom Hearts. My lord, I want that game. And now, I want Kingdom Hearts I even though that game hasn't even been announced yet! Nomura, if anything, is the best hype-man I've ever seen!
Is it weird that I just happened to be listening to "Hell Yeah" while reading that section? I think its weird.
Hm, Filler's almost over, although this ranks up with some of the best Bleach comedy fillers, in my opinion
-SirAngelo |
 Infinite Freedom 2010-01-07 . chapter 28I really don't know what to say this time around other than Happy New Year. |
 Krystal Lily Potter 2010-01-07 . chapter 28You know how I want the contest to go down!
Also I'm pretty sure that I'm going to ruin BBS for myself. I know I'm going to look up not only the summary, but I'll probably watch quite a few cutscenes. I do it every single time! I mean, it comes out in Japan in two days and it'll be anywhere from 4 to 8 months here.
Wow there were no typos to be seen in this. Amazing. You must have an awesome beta. lol
So apparently some of the scenes from the BBS trailer were from the secret ending. I'm willing to bet that little Sora watching a "meteor" falling and him sitting on the tree are two parts of it. That's just me though.
Krystal Lily Potter |
 VirgilTheart 2010-01-07 . chapter 28*Still laughing at Sora and Roxas singing "When The Sun Goes Down"* Well done my friend! =D
I'm quite fond of the two's presents and I gotta say Sora's gonna appreciate that armor when he and Kairi go off and travel with the Fellowship. ;D
Update soon! =D
Your Pal,
VT |
 KeyblademasterA 2010-01-05 . chapter 27Wow. Your battle scenes are so well written. I really wish Sora would've hit that guy with his automail arm though. Oh well. update soon |
 2Lazy2Login 2009-12-29 . chapter 27 great chapter as usual. But I wonder if the name was accidental or on purpose? "Newyearsux," "New Years Sucks" was how I said it in my head. lol XD |
 Nobody-XV 2009-12-28 . chapter 27Your battle sequences are extremely well written. The amount of detail put into them, as well as emotional issues, helps to paint the pictures in my head. Thank you for FINALLY posting the chapter with Kairi and Garda's fight. Long story short, It was epic!I hope you update soon. THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!
~Nobody-XV |
 SirAngelo 2009-12-28 . chapter 27So those guys picked a fight with a group that had Obelix? Even if they were drunk, what the hell were they thinking!
Can't wait for "Ultimate Warrior", just the title chapter tantalizes me. And I liked the short duel between Kairi and Garda. I guess I'll have some competition in a short while, whenever you do your next big fight. But just watch, I got a little something I'm dying to write down and hope it will work wonders. What is it? You'll see (grins evilly...)
-SirAngelo |
 Krystal Lily Potter 2009-12-28 . chapter 27You should have let Sora slug that guy with his metal arm! That would have made my day! Not gonna lie, I actually saw something like that happen. There was one girl doing a gymnastics routine and the guy sitting behind me started talking about her, and her boyfriend turned around and smashed him in the face. Why is it always funny when something like that happens to someone else?
Either way, good chapter! ALSO, I double checked on the whole comma before a name thing. While it IS commonly done, it's not completely necessary. It usually is used when saying a persons name directly to them though. IE: "Sora, blah blah blah" or "blah blah blah, Sora." But only when speaking directly to the person. It's because the sentence is a complete sentence, even without the name.
Just thought I'd clarify that.
Again, good chapter as always. Nobody thing was a little random, but oh well!
-Krystal Lily Potter~ |
 Ikaru Kakou 2009-12-28 . chapter 27So my big question is, if Kairi really had been going all out, would the result of that match been any different?
Drunk assholes are always fun to get people angry. I'm sort of surprised Sora held out that long. Oh, and poor Aiwemon countering innuendos he doesn't understand.
You call those love triangles? I call it a love dodecahedron. I swear you have a chart somewhere for who is in love with who.
Oh, the Romans. I'd almost suggest Newyearsux get himself some Legionnaire Nobodies, but then again that wouldn't make as much sense because Newyearsux kinda sucks.
And my final question has very little to do with the story, but after playing 358/2 Days, did you find yourself with a deep hatred of pink Heartless? |
 Infinite Freedom 2009-12-28 . chapter 27That was a great fight. I get the feeling that Garda could take on any of Sora's early enemies and win without much trouble. And by early I mean up until his first visit to Agrabah. I also like how Newyearsux turned and ran. Kinda wished that Sora would have able to do some damage to the drunks though. |
 Topaz Tsubasa 2009-12-28 . chapter 27LOL, I was laughing soo hard at the "sword is a little too small" joke! I have this little inside joke with my friends about that, so I was cracking up for about 5 minutes before I could sober up again! Aren't inside jokes the best? And if I were Sora, I would've beaten those guys up so bad, they wouldn't even have time to run to their mommies; they'd be lying on the ground being the disfigured monkeys that they now are, thanks to moi. Yes! Finally, Kairi vs. Garda! Though it was crappy that she was holding back, it was still super awesome! I can't wait for more action to happen! Thanks and Bye-B! ^_~ |