I am so glad to find fanfiction on this series! There was no real plot concerning the relationship between Amon and Robin. I'm glad you've started after the factory and have kept as close to the story-line as possible. Please, keep this going. You have my support!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

this is really good. it was a little confusing when you kept switching from amon/robin to STNJ. but it's interesting, especially when you wrote that robin has a half brother. i can't wait to see what happens next. father juliano kinda seems out of character but it's your story and it seems to work anyways. i hope to see more amon x robin, as in i hope amon will admit his feelings. update when you can. :)

also, what does “Cosa posso fare quando vive?” mean? i don't think you explained it...