I read this story at the BLTS archive recently and just loved it! Many nice personal touches that fit so well with the characters (Tom in a home overlooking the ocean in Ireland, Janeway's farmhouse in Indiana); the story is believeable and compelling. Thanks for a great read.

I always look forward to your fics. They are just so great, but this one is just the best! I am now up way passed my bedtime becuase I couldn't stop reading it. I hope you continue to write more JP. There is just not enough fics out there for my most favorite shipping.

Another excellent chapter--I love the _dailiness_ of their lives, figuring out schedules, what's for dinner, why are you kissing Aunt Kath?, and all of it put together.

Tom ought to go buy a ring soon--it'll look so much better on Janeway's finger than through his nose...

They're married--they just don't know it yet. Excellent chapter, and looking forward to more.

Ear infections are common in children, period--been there, done that, lived with the pink penicillin . But Kathryn, Tom and Miral are a family now, and Lt. Ellis is just going to have to live with it. (I thought that Tom taking ship duty would be the last blow to his marriage, and I was right).

I think Lt. Ellis needs to meet Seven sometime .

Yes, even Janeway knows better than to get between Tom and his toys! And...Tom flying with Kathryn will be the final thing that parts him and B'Elanna--he'll leave home for Janeway, but not for B'Elanna or his daughter. In his heart, he's made his choice, though I suspect he doesn't know it yet.

First of all, I love this pairing. Second of all I love your story. It keeps the characters in character and still manages to mesh canon into a believable Paris/Janeway fic. If you wanted to continue with this particular story, you'd have a great sequel as well. Great job.

Oh this chapter is just lovely, I could say that Kathryn is slightly OOC, but as we never really saw the "real" Kathryn Janeway on the show, who is to say what she is like when not being a Captain. Thats why I really like the little elements of the Captain, that keep appearing in her dialogue of this fic. The "command tone", the death glare. Nicely done. Tom seemed to have lost a little of his fire in your earlier chapters...but he's beginning to resurface, I'm putting it down to his unhappy situation with B'lanna, which now seems to have passed. Can't wait for chapter 7. Thanks for sharing this with us...Its really great

Sorry I've been lazy in my reviewing...naughty Tostikat, no cookies for you.
Another great chapter, with beautiful dialogue. I really enjoyed this chapter, more soon please.

This was just absolutely beautiful! They were so natural, and so in character. I loved your usage of present tense...it really added a lot to the dynamic of the story. I'm so sad to see it end! Write more, please!

*Sigh* Beautiful, is this the end? If so...I really hope you keep writing you have an amazing talent for fic...I spent most of last night reading all your Cath/Gris too ;-) Jessox

Wow, I really enjoyed reading this story. Thanks for writing it!

Just found this story and I really ike it! I have never really tried a Janeway/Paris fan but you may have just changed my mind!! :)

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Damn how did I miss this fic! I just spent until 5.30am reading it!! I need more!! Fab as always hun!

Oh, my--they are growing closer and Seven is seeing it. I love Tom when he repairs stuff!