Yeah kind of neat.

haha... Ruriko is an inhalant! Nah, Its really nice.

Hmmm, very sad fic, Yuki-chan. Shun seemed a bit OOC, but Kaoru, considering the situation, was right on character-wise. _

Uh-huh. It isn't that bad...but maybe you should try to make it more natural. The dialogue and thoughts were kinda stiff and corny.