Ok I know it doesn't exist, but it'd be real interesting to play Sha-Zayet. Just turn down the shock for falling off/through the platform and I know a bunch of people who would seriously enjoy playing it - to bad the tech doesn't exist... Oh well, now to read Ward. Actually the crossover caught my attention first but listed a prequel so...

I love this story!

Only 18 reviews for this story? It's a crime. This is probably my favourite fanfic in the whole JA fandom :) I can't really say anything more than that.

I love the story.

Am really looking forward to reading the next chapter! :-)

Wow. i loved this stroy. you did a very good job with the plot, incorporating offworld and the nephrolite. props to you. hope to read more of your stories in the future.

O_O I'm confused. Are you revising the chapters? I thought this was already complete, and then I see it at the top of my fav's list. Surprised me. Update soon?

Wow, my mind is blown by how amazing this is.

Wow, this was an awesome story! I really enjoyed your writing, I think you had a good balance of action and character. You did a great job capturing the characters. I feel like I should dig out my JA books so I can better appreciate the setting of this story in the timeline. I'm so excited to read the sequel but I really shouldn't start it at 1am when I have to get up at 7:30.

Wow. I read the whole thing in 2 days, cause I was reading till 1 am and it was getting ridiculous. This is a really wonderfully written story- I love all the attention to details, the thought you've put into this story and how you've fleshed it out. Obi Wan, Qui Gon and Tahl and in character and wonderful, especially the bond between Obi Wan and Qui Gon. What can I say about Xanatos except that I love how evil he is? I loved the dynamics between him and Obi Wan. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I'm off to read to sequel, I hope you write more fics (in this fandom or in others) because this one was magnificent.

Fantastic fic! I think the only reason for lack of reviews is the size of the fandom (

e kawai yes i am demented for thinkin this story is adourable but i wuv it cant wait to finish reading it, xani is smexies but this story kinda make me like obi more hm... if only they rewrote the series for a older more darker gen it could be so great... for now this works perfectly :) thnx for writing

OMG-that was so incredible and amazing and breathtaking. Once i had read the first chapter, i simply could not stop at all! fantastic work!

Favourite fanfic ever, its just amazing. I love reading it every so often

I liked this one a lot.

I think you'd get more reviews if you had spaced the uploading out. Upload one chapter every two weeks, give yourself time to get viewers. I always look at reviews counts to judge whether or not to read it, unless it has an intriguing summary.