maybe they are speaking as one

It's sesshoumaru, right? Thoroughly enjoyed this one! Please write more sess/rin!

I'd say it's from Sesshomaru's perspective...am I right? wrong?

I love how you always get into the deeper emotions of these two. That you refer to them as 'pack' is great. No matter how you see them, they are 'pack'.

You always show what lurks beneath the surface, and keep it so wonderfully in character, and this does work for both of them, beautifully.

I have a comedy one like this... called 'the treaty' where you THINK one person is narrating the whole time and then you find out it's someone else but it's crack!fic. I must say I like your serious take on this theme much more!

Keep writing them and I'll keep reading them! I love getting an email notification that you've updated, always brightens my day.

An admirer of your work,

Ravyn Skye

I think I've reviewed too many of your stories, I may just have to give in and add you to my favourite author's list. :)

I really liked this. I know it can be read from start to finish from either Sesshoumaru or Rin's point of view, but it seems like such a bittersweet ending that I can't help think it's Sesshoumaru mulling over Rin post-death (whether it be one of her manga deaths, or a death that's come along post-manga).

Of course, I'm listening to Mylene Farmer right now, so maybe it's just the music I'm listening to. Even so, it's a well-written story.

I liked this a lot. The ambiguity of the speaker really works. Well done!

Wah! We still don't know if it's Sesshomaru or Rin narrating! But I don't really get the ending line. The trust goes two ways? ? But uncommon and enjoyable-to-read descriptions as always. I like how you added both Sesshomaru and Rin's fears of each other in the narrative ^_^.

~AquaWater99

T_T Oh my god this is poetry