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Sargent Snarky
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
Oh, and a couple things I forgot to mention. xD;;

Ok, I know this is a complete... tri-shot meant as an additional support conversation, but I feel as though you could easily expand it, and it would be nice to see that.

Also, a note about the name... it seems odd to mix English and Latin, and I feel it might be better if you stuck with one or the other. Either Lux et Anima (or Lux atque Anima; atque and et both mean and)or Light and the Mind - or however you choose to translate 'anima.' It just... strikes me as odd to see the English & Latin combined.
Sargent Snarky
2009-03-03 . chapter 3
I like what I have read so far. =) I enjoy reading about interactions of characters who normally don't get written about together. Plus, I have a soft spot for both Rhys and Soren.

This has been an enjoyable read, and I look forward to reading more. It'll be interesting to see how Rhys is as a teacher.
RandomTopic
2009-02-01 . chapter 3
Aw, Rhys is awesome. :) Love their interactions and the portrayal of characters. Hope you update soon!
Chef Colette
2009-01-17 . chapter 3
Great chapter!
It was a good conversation between Soren and Rhys!
Keep up the great work!
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