 Sargent Snarky 2009-03-03 . chapter 1Oh, and a couple things I forgot to mention. xD;;
Ok, I know this is a complete... tri-shot meant as an additional support conversation, but I feel as though you could easily expand it, and it would be nice to see that.
Also, a note about the name... it seems odd to mix English and Latin, and I feel it might be better if you stuck with one or the other. Either Lux et Anima (or Lux atque Anima; atque and et both mean and)or Light and the Mind - or however you choose to translate 'anima.' It just... strikes me as odd to see the English & Latin combined. |
 Sargent Snarky 2009-03-03 . chapter 3I like what I have read so far. =) I enjoy reading about interactions of characters who normally don't get written about together. Plus, I have a soft spot for both Rhys and Soren.
This has been an enjoyable read, and I look forward to reading more. It'll be interesting to see how Rhys is as a teacher. |