|Reviews for Final Fantasy Versus XIII: Fortis|
| One fan 5/9/13 . chapter 81
Ah, it's good to know you're okay. But I do have to agree with some of the reviewers here. If it takes so long to update why not give them their happily ever after already? Then when you have time you can do an after story of their life?
| Catlover 5/9/13 . chapter 32
Why the fuck does she even cry? She's such a weak character. So what if Noctis was with Sera? Doesn't matter if she loves him and what not. This love is worst than Twilight.
| Reader 5/9/13 . chapter 32
Aww sad that she cried.
| rheya201 3/8/13 . chapter 81
Good luck on ur majors!
Just wondering, do you get your stories beta-ed? It would help get rid of a few typos and stuff I've noticed in ur work - nothing major :)
Hoping you update soon,
| AnimeWolfGirl16 2/12/13 . chapter 80
I can't wait for the next update! I love this fanfiction and the way you write it is so perfect! Sorry for not reviewing for all of the other chapters but I wanted to catch up to the lastest chapter before reviewing.
| amber.flores.549 1/12/13 . chapter 30
Wow, myles gave noctis good advice about love. The story is great, i luv it, noctis must tell elia his feelings.
| TodaysNut 1/4/13 . chapter 81
Thank God! I honestly thought you were not going to continue it! I was pretty close in bawling my eyes out when you Finally decided to give us some kind of news (and the good ones! :D), really glad that youre gonna update!... Hope ya had a nice Christmas and New Year celebrations!
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 12/27/12 . chapter 80
Yay! Finally all caught up! I'm not going to leave a heartfelt review until I have finished this installment of the Fortis phenomenon XD That sounded really professional :D Anyway, I am curious to see how Elia will react to being tampered with by the ministers... I love how you made Felix react to Myle's being Elia's 'Dad' XD That was hilarious to picture :P Well, this is the first time I'm saying this for this story: Update soon! I can't wait to see how Fortis ends! (And hopefully the beginning of part 2 :3)
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 12/27/12 . chapter 78
Well, First, let me say I looked up the 'Let me be your armor' song and I was truly surprised by how it reminded me of Noctis and Elia! Especially with the 'Let me take the blows meant for you' and the 'light through the darkest night' (Since he's Light of the Night Sky) :) Any more songs that will remind me of this awesome pairing?
Okay, now about the chapter. My jaw dropped when Elia said she hated Nocts! I was like WTH! But of course, Noctis is too hard to resist- especially all smexy with that motorcycle of his. :3 I liked picturing Noctis in pajamas though XD I found that quite humorous :D Laus needs to shut up! We already have Sera to deal with and I honestly can't wait for Noctis to embarrass the hell out of him and put him in his place!
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 12/27/12 . chapter 77
:3 I could picture this scene very well, great job writing it! I thought she would've known it was Noctis just by the way he walked over to her since she pays so much attention to even the smallest things about him. I was half hoping she'd run though XD I wanted him to tackle her :P I was surprised Felix didn't jumped over the fence after her too, but I can see why he didn't. Well, I'm getting close to being caught up! :D Yay!
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 12/26/12 . chapter 68
:3 Felix got me so tickled in this chapter XD Something about the way you make him so blunt about his opinions is hilarious :P Now to find out what's up with Noctis and the creepy people XP
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 12/25/12 . chapter 60
:D ! Yay yay yay yay yay! He kissed her :D If only she would've woken up after it :P But that would've been too cheesy XD Well, I'm hoping Felix and Gareth are doing ok and Noctis gets better from whatever problems he seems to be having :P Onto the next chapter! Oh! One more thing. I was just curious about who the spy is *glares around suspiciously* I'm betting it's the pain in the ass Sera. :P
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 12/25/12 . chapter 58
Noooooooo! Elia! Come back to Noctis! You can't just die like that! Not when he was so close to happiness! That damn Andreas! How dare he do that to Felix and Elia! Noctis should've beat the hell out of him! That monster got off way too easy!
| Ohrmehgawd 12/25/12 . chapter 81
When I read this fic three years ago I thought you gave as an amazing story. I've reread it and realized it's just bad writing - really bad, draggy writing.
| The Critique 12/24/12 . chapter 81
OMG. Stop dragging this story and just finish it! If you can no longer commit to updating this story, then end it. But how to do it while keeping with the ante of your 81-chaptered (eighty. one.) story? Two words: JUST. WRITE. Stop making excuses. I love this story, but I think its time you give Noctis and Elia their happily ever after.