I likes it lots and I am sorry about nobody reviewing... I have the same problem. Anywho I would adore you if you continued I will even put you in my favorites list!! Please?!<3 <3 <3

I love it! Just continue!

keep writing

great story continue PLESE!

I like your story so far! It's different, and I always like the stories that don't have the Flock in them. I like the ones with the flock in them too, but I like both! Keep posting, I want to know who the "boy" is!

AH i love it!

Who is this boy you speakith of? The boy from Le Incident probably? But, no. This is a bird kid... Well, my memory's extremely poor, so I guess I'll have to see! :D

Ahh, this is so EXCITING! Can't wait!

O.O

They, Vie's mom and Tiff died?

You have a reason right? Like... it would be to much of a burden to remember these characters or to include them in some of the stuff that happens?

I started crying too...

But actually, even though this chapter was extremely depressing, I think that you did a fantastic job with the feelings that Vie felt. (*claps*) Fantastic job! No sarcasm.

Oh, by the way, the language was Slovak. :)

That's really saddening... her mom died and Tiff died too... that makes me kind of sad... but oh well keep on writing the story. I'd like to see what comes next

I love - LOVE - HIM!

Oh, I'm going to say the rest of my review in a different language 'cause I'm bored and I need milk. Guess, guess, guess what language it is! You don't have to if you don't want, I'll put a translation and stuff... Whatever - on with Le Review! Huzzah!

Čo sa deje? Nič 'ďaleko. Awesome kapitolu, rovnako ako posledný, prvý, a každý jeden v strede. Ale už viem. Update čoskoro, a ... bolo niečo iného som pridať, ale zabudol som. (* Oklepe *)

Ah, yes, what fun.

Here's English: What's up? Nothin' much. Awesome chapter, like the last one, the first, and every single one in between. But you already know that. Update soon, and... there was something else I was going to add, but I forgot. (*shrug*)

I like this... sometimes these stories about the mutant bird-kids that are out in the world are good, other times bad. This one, I give two thumbs up.

Are you planning for Vie, to meet Max and the Flock at some point? Or are you only going to continue with Vie as a stand-alone story?

Romance + deception + death + anger, sounds ike the perfect medly for disaster... or someone's going to be tramatized by the end of this story. Totally emotionally screwed.

Harde-har-har...

I feel like... quen of the world 'cause I'm the first person to review. Excelent!

Yes! You used my song! Oh, and for Sweet Lullaby, by Deep Forest, I found a website where they have the lyrics in both Baegu (the original language) and English (the translation)w.deepforestmusic(dot com)/lyrics.htm#lyric_sweetlullaby
Yes! (*punches air*) Success! You used my song!

Who screamed? Well... I'm going to let my imagination run for a sec. Maybe it's some person (girl right?) being muggled... (a muggler = a burgaler (or however you spell it) plus murderer. I made it up, I think. :D) I guess I'll have to wait and see 'cause I have a big feeling that I'm wrong...

Oh, and one more thing before I send the review:
Boys...

(*holds hands up in surrender-ish way*) New reader, new reader!

I love your story, and you could use a smitch more detail...

Okay, honestly, I suck at giving critz so, I'm just going to be here, along for the ride, seeing if I come up with something...

Hunters = bad, got that...

Hm... Do you think that Finn could become... good perhaps? I thought that she was going to have a somebody somebody...

Y'know, I think this would be a fantastic song for Vie, Tunnel by the Used.

Oh my God, I just got this fantasteristic (hate that word) idea. You should have Vie run into (fly into) another bird kid while in Orlando - NO! Wait, make it "run". Um... She could go to school, hang out with some boy/girl (which ever you prefer) that becomes Vie's friend and that boy/girl could just o-so happen to have wings.

Yeah... Just an idea. (*shrug*) But I do love your story, and I think you should continue! I'll be your faithful reviewer starting now.