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Reviews for: Rachel's Beginning
Nanoe
2009-09-30 . chapter 3
This story sounds pretty good
Kuro Yuki Valkyrie
2009-06-27 . chapter 3
keep going!
MASTERGAMERSEMPAI
2009-06-12 . chapter 3
I'm addicted. Update soon!
haha21
2009-05-30 . chapter 3
This chapter was a bit dull; there wasn't much action or suspense, but it's to be expected. After all, not all chapters can be exciting when fillers are needed. Well, update again soon. And I suggest that you spell out the word "miss" instead of using "ms". "Ms" is used when there is a name after: Ms. Smith.
Midna Hytwilian
2009-05-27 . chapter 3
LOVED IT! Just wondering when she'll be sent back and meet Icky!
haha21
2009-05-25 . chapter 2
Hey, this is turning out to be an interesting story! Update soon; I look forward to reading more of this.
Midna Hytwilian
2009-05-12 . chapter 2
I'm reviewing cause well this ** rocks. I wonder though...will she being thrust into old times? Like meeting a certain constabble?

Booklyn's up, the Batteries down, and home is this way,
Midna
darkbloodangel342
2009-05-06 . chapter 2
I LOVE IT!
Tanja2210
2009-05-02 . chapter 2
Good start and very interessting! Please update soon!
Casinya
2009-01-21 . chapter 1
This story has a lot of promise for one amazing adventure!
And you have delved into my favourite of stories/films.
I do hope to see more from you in the future; this first chapter was so intriguing!
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