Haha for a second I thought they were going to to swimming at that lake from before...or have lemons with each other in the forest alone(am I using that right? I have no idea honestly. Never really used the word "lemon" before like this). But yes it was still a good ending for the story. But if Keira or Sky have children will their kids be halfbreeds? :]

So I've been reading this and it is insanely amazing at how good it is. I still remember the Jake and Daxter games and I loved them a lot. I would still have them now if my parents hadn't made me trade them in. Your take on this is really unique and pretty amazing but I'm just wondering if I missed something with how Sky was so suddenly introduced into the story. Is there a part that I missed? And if the Dark Eco in Keiras body is liking holding your breath underwater won't you eventually drown or have to breath? Really thought provoking and really good story :]

great job you did amazing on this story im the person that reads in order so ill be looking for the next one

Loved it. I love how you made all of them meeting just a chance occurance.

Hi! So I just wanted to say that it's nice to read a story where Jak isn't gay for once. No offence to gay people, it just puts him out of character. Oh and the one thing that kinda disappointed me was that jak just wasn't... Beastly enough LOL. I can't really describe any other way, but yeah great story!

this was better than awesome. please put the sequeal up as soon as possable.

RHP: THIS IS AWESOME! I LOVE how you protray Dark Jak! Please update soon- (eyes get darker) or I'll hunt you down!

(eyes lighten, and she skips away humming)

Willow: O.O

Dark Jak: O.o

Willow: What just happened?

Dark: I.. don't..know...

love the story. i can't wait until the sequel.

A good story, so far at least. Keep it up, this is one hell of a story. Some parts had me laughing hysterically, and other parts were heartwarming, such as the Jak/Keira moment at the end. But, Kellan should have put into the story more at the beginning, because he had a rather spontaneous entrance. Secondly, it didn't really work how Sky met Kellan spontaneously, danced with him, and then had sex with him 10 minutes later. But still, this is a very good story

1st review! Yay!

i just love the relationship between Sky and Jak they're almost like brother and sister.

i couldn't help but laugh at jak's reaction to keira.

keep it up! and don't forget to update soon! :)