very clever. I enjoyed the read

Amazing, I can see how this would transpire, slowly losing the old Sarah as she ages. Very awe inspiring

Just heard the podcast of this fic. Nice Yeats reference and I like how "When the world falls down" is the LAST answer Jareth gives...flows very nicely. The zombies made me groan though. Why zombies? Half the world must be obsessed with zombies!

I'm listening to the audiobook. It's fucking TITS. Holy shit! It makes me so happy! what the shit! <3 ALL OF YOUR STORIES NEED AUDIOBOOKS DFNKSAFKJDSAF

It was so fucking crazy to hear that story spoken out loud. Your weird syrup thing, and the rust and stardust, and, shit, dude. I was so worked up by the end that I was totally tearing up with joy. XD You are the coolest person ever Selah. Your story sounded so cool out loud, like I dont even know, fucking AMAZING.

umm but yeah. That fucking rocked hard.

High praise from me! This was very well rounded and had tinges of many genres in it. Superb writing.

this is probably the saddest and happiest labyrinth fan fiction i have read. unforgettable story.

"Then won't you come away, oh Human Child?" - love that line!! Great writing & a kind of bittersweet ending. Really enjoyable :)

This story took my breath away. It was beautifully written, and very romantic in a tragic sort of way. I also loved the little bits of humor, specifically the zombies and the cockroaches.

Chilling and gorgeous. Takes a few moments to sink in that she's gone completely crazy in living forever and lost herself. Portrays Bastard!Jareth perfectly. I was a little confused at the bit where one of her old boyfriends found her and had to reread that section to get it, but other than that everything flowed well.

This story is fantastic, creepy, romantic, beautiful...there are so many words. Your an excellent writer. Keep on being amazing.

That was a beautiful story and sad. I suppose love everlasting is not possible in our realm of life but reading it here was heart warming. You write very well and the imagery was so well set that one could almost see it. Thank you for this little piece of joy.

Wow! That was incredible. I really loved the part where Sarah asks about whether the sun was always so large. And the ending was great.

That was cool. it was sort of disturbing and if I had read this at 3 in the morning I think I would have been scared shitless. But I liked it.

This was a nice mix of cynicism and subtle romance, I think. I like this take on what would've happened after the movie.

Rather pessimistic view of the next few thousand years. Clever though, and the evolution of the characters is interesting.