I luv how you write these Paris and Jess stories. I sometimes knock Jess in the stories I write, but the truth is that he and Paris would have made a much better couple on that show than him and Rory (her low key personality seemed more suited to the laid back Dean) and I think I would have enjoyed Jess' character much, much better if they could have paired him with Paris instead. You're writing is very excellent, by the way, I hope this is something you're also doing professionally.

good story

I was looking for some other ships than the standard ships and was pleased to find this story. I thought it was well done! :)

I really liked spending the time with Paris. A lot of fans are mean about her, but I think she's a great character. I don't know if she's this self-aware, though, LOL. She's such a mess of insecurities!

The aspect of your fic that I really enjoyed was all the wandering around town, and seeing it through someone else's eyes. That was neat, it was like being behind the scenes. Good story, and good backstory on Jess.

Awe Nate!! I seriously love how you wrote Jess, he was right on target despite the fact that we have so little information about him. I love this story, very realistic and I think you turned me into a Paris and Jess lover darn you.- Lauren

Well, this is a great character analysis of Jess. I love him and all already on the show but I just don't want him with Rory. Great fic! Oh and not to be prude or anything but I am currently writing a fic it's R/T mainly but Paris and Jess are on the side. So I know what it's like to want them together!

Great job Nate, really think you did a good job writing Jess on limited information.

Wow! Nate, that was a really great story! Jess was very in character...:)

well written and really stylish, it's a good piece of work; you really know how to string words together. can't say im crazy about the coupling, but that's not what makes a good story. it's all about the skills and you so do have those.
luce

Nate, I think you wrote Jess incredibly well, just like you always do with Paris! I'm so happy you wrote the first P/J fic, and now I want more! Great job!