this is so perfect. absolutely perfect.

I'll be honest. I wasn't going to read this story because I'm not a big fan of the pairing. But I decided to read it anyway and I LOVED IT! You had me addicted to the drama and suspense in this story. I really grew to like this couple. I wish you added more romance though such as a kiss.
Anyway, awesome story! You should write an epilogue!)

My friend pointed me to your story, and he was right; it really is excellent. Your story is spellbinding as it toes a line between horror and a faint romance/friendship. I couldn't tear my eyes away, especially during the scene where what Noah's father thought he did was revealed and the final showdown. The moral struggles Heather goes through are incredibly well developed, and although a few areas are a little to coincidental, overall the story is quite convining. Your grammar is quite good, although there were a few minor typos like a random F and a few wrong, but real words, but nothing major. I hope you're able to finish this story at some point, and am interested to see where it goes!-spader

oh my gosh that was nerve-wracking!
and don't be hard on yourself. this chapter wasn't bad at all. it was amazing, kept me at the edge of my seat.

it was pretty disgusting though, lol. oh man, I really hope they make it! glad they did in this chapter!

Oh my gosh it's so weird, I found this story on the TDI fiction wiki site and I've been keeping up ever since! Just a few days ago I went to see if it had been updated! Thank you for updating this story is so addicting! I love it! You should be a writer you know that)

Even worse? I think think it was so bad. I noticed some typos but those are always there.

You're finally back! I'm so glad you updated!

This chapter was pretty gory though. Ugh!

Anyways, keep up the good work!

I've been reading this on DA, and it's just pulled me in from the first sentence! I had to get a account so I can tell you this. :D

A cliffy ? WHYYY? Plleaaaasee post soon ! I love this ! It's such a weird couple but it's cute and twisted in a way o.O

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It's a relief that they actually have a chance of getting out of the whole mess! I was sitting here going, "DAYUM! Inescapable!" But then Charlie showed up. D ho ho ho

This is an absolutely wonderful story. It's not often you get a good, dark, well thought out TDI fic, and I'm genuinly amazed at your writing ability.

WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED?

why cliffy?

i wanted to cry this whole chap!

yay! they love each other!

and there's hope?

This was a good chapter. The ending was a bit grusome and made me cringe a few times, but hey it waws well written and interesting. Update soon.

The clifhanger it's just… annoying me because I need to know who she shoot.

I can't believe I read this story a while ago but never reviewed it. 8D

Awesome story. I do feel sorry for Heather though and as for Chp 17, I like how the umbrella didn't come out of no where. Kind of symbolic if you ask me. :3

I don't think Heather shot Noah though, I think she shot the boss dude.