Beautiful.

I love your use of sentence structure and repitition for effect and it's a lovely way of expressing how Spike feels while also letting us know why he can never share those feelings. Very heart-wrenching.

Who knew Spike could be this poignant?

Again. Amazing! You desribed what he felt perfectly. Can't hide your talent
OlgaB

that was bitter and depressive in a good sort of way...kinda like my mood at present...but it was a good little buffyism...off to the west wing...?

Beautiful... just beautiful and very in character.

Beautifully written and so full of angst! DtVS, Samwolf and now this -I'm impressed. Keep writing!

That was beautiful! So very sad and beautiful.

This was good, especially for someone as nasty as Spike...

Anywho...please write more about Snape-chan soon! I wanna see what happens next! Pretty please with magic on top?

Loved it very well written! :o)

wowsers, that was beautiful. Absolutely amazing.

Wow, that was excellent Nomad. I *loved* it.

Can i just say wow? I mean, really! How did you get inside Spike's head so well? This is so good! Buffy is Spike's everything. And he won't risk telling her because it won't mean anything to her. *sigh* This was *so* good.