WHY DIDN'T MATT AND MELLO LIVE IN THE ANIME?!?!?!
Your story brings to life for me one of my favorite alternate realities, the one where Matt and Mello survive Death Note. They would totally live together after surviving that day.
The thing is...I think Mello's idea of a chocolate chip pancake would be all chocolate chip and no pancake!
Thank you for the very illustrative story that tells the truth about Matt and Mello as people, not just as criminals tied up in the Kira case.
I'm such a dork...I've commented on like three of your stories! They all make me cry!

YAY FOR HAPPY ENDINGD!

OMG. Talk about a twist.

You would not believe how depressed i was getting reading Matt's dream (ok so you probably would), but the end was sweet ... CHOC-CHIP PANCAKES!

wow and you actually called them pancakes .. being an aussie i get annoyed when Americans insist on calling them Hotcakes ... i only say hotcakes at Maccas

Very good. I knew Mello secretly cooked pancakes...
Meh. i liked the ending (they didn't die! woo hoo!)

YAAY! I do like oneshots... hehe. ^_^ And I don't care if this wasn't your BEST, nothing you write could be BAD, which means this is important to read no matter what.

Well, I liked it! ^^ I hate them dying...I have many theories as to how they could have lived but this was't in the collection...YAY!! It made me very happy...

You were right, someone did like it, that someone being me. Cool story, very glad it had a happy ending!

Hey, I did like this, so don't say it wasn't good. I love reading AUs that involve them living. After all, what Mello/Matt fan doesn't? I only wish that this was how the series ended, so then they could get that 200 episode series you always mention in your disclaimers.

Anyway, this one-shot was great. I hope you update Savior soon.

...*squeal* I adored this to bits and pieces. I wish this is how it actually ended! Nice work!!

N-Near died? *cries*
Matt: *glare* it was just a dream...
Me:oh...*laughs*
O_O random...
ok...the verdict...

IT WAS AWESOME! whotzies! really good..as I am really picky...lucky i picked this...and yes, i'm cravin some chocolate pancakes right now...thanks...O_O