That was unexpected. But very well written. Great job!

Ok... when I read the "Disgrace to her gender" line from mozenrath about Jasmine, I thought "wierd he thinks like that, but.. yay for the sentiment?" (And ofc, Jas isnt at all how he thought about her anyway) Then you throw that curve at the end and it made me laugh (and also made the opinion on women make a lot more sense). This si definitely something I haven't seen before. lol You get points for originality.

That is an unexpected twist. Well done.

I like it keep it up.

Okay um first WHOA a woman neat idea but it's clear he's a he

Second I concur intentions don't matter getting the job done is what matters regardless of ethics take Jack Bauer yes he tortured but he saved L.A. and put him on trial no way you'll find twelve people who'll convict him and if you do stupid people have taken over and populated so much the human race is doomed

Yes the Sultan is probably not domestic policy (I think that is the proper term) competent but his toys he knows engineering and he's been shown in his youth he was a good soldier and probably knows how to command troops

Jasmine is competent but Mozenwrath does look down on her before learning of her competence

Like I said it's what you can do AND how hard you willing to work that matter in that scence I can see how Moze would look down on Al heroes don't act they react hereos have morals villains have work ethic they feed the hungry clothe the naked help the sick lead their people (and others up to the multiverse they conquer) to unimaginable glory long term under their benevolent dictatorship but I think it's always a point that unlike villains like Ra's al Ghul and Luthor who could end famine and cure cancer heroes if they became tyrants couldn't pull off a benevolent dictatorship heroes don't have the logistical or whatever knowledge but Take Doctor Doom once he did take over the world he fixed a lot of problems and ran it better than most governments could ever hope to manage and is more or less a benevolent dictator or as he calls in enforced monarchy but he found the actual job of running the world to be so boring he let the revolution win