Hello,

You dont have many reviews which I think is so bad for such a brilliant and well written story. I really enjoy it, so please continue :)

~Fish Finger~

Welcome my dear! And might I say you started off with a great fic! Are you planning to continue it? It's definitely an interesting start you have, I'd be interested to see how it continues after Jack gets back from Brokeback/Ennis (I'm assuming I know what's going to happen there... haha)

A good start. Your dialogue is good, your form is wonderful and your writing is a good easy read. :) Good job kiddo.

Jen