Very fun! ;-)

Love a DTE the most! :D

Loved it.

Motherduckatschool

oh my gosh, i love this story. its most excellent.

omg...this should be a continuation.

don't leave this a one-shot (although it's a really good one-shot...) :)

love it! keep on writing!

That was hot...please write more!

oh I love it! I love the ending lmao.

That was a freakin awesome one-shot! Thanks for sharing it.

wow! that was really hot

i also loved that there was a story line behind the lemon

:)

damn that was hot!

Awesome oneshot!

I think you should make it into a story if you ever get the chance to!

Fantastic and super hot! A little Dirty talk never hurt anyone. :D

Excellent story! Hot, romantic, and sweet. I loved it. Wouldn't mind if you decided to add another chapter even (please?).

I love it! I want this to made into a story! Your writing is excellent. The scene left me panting, and the characterization was perfect! I love it when Edward and Bella get right to the point. They know they should be together, the real adventure is in the relationship. Please consider it? Thanks for an awesome lemon anyway!