This is like CSI except its 10 times better. The real world twist that you added to the series is great. I'm not to sure if I like Minako though. I loved the other characters though. The idea and writing style is great and I am amused at your hints of humor!

A very good story you have going. I just want some more girl fights foing on...

Lol, thank you for the compliments. I will say that I feel so ashamed that my stories, none really, have been updated since this summer. I have contemplated about next chapters but no action has been taken. T.T sorry.


I must say that each new chapter is a continious surprise and wonder for me. The beginning of the chapter. Hotaru, when I didn't know it was her, was a surprising visit. I had assumed that only Usagi would ever really visit him. I had, at first, thought maybe it was Minako and then the strange talk. It fits. Hotaru and Duo are rather alike and the fact that they both are connected with death or Gods of death adds a dark factor, like Hotaru mentioned, to it.


I like your Hotaru, she is serious and can be like any teen girl at a moments notice, which brings up the mask concept. I have a feeling both will be surprising when all things come together in the long run.



Rei and Minako's interaction was so a moment that one could feel the tension lying beneath what they both were saying. I will also be a lame and say I loved how Minako was kind of leaving Wufei in the dust and he seemed so eager to catch up to her. Just to find both Senshi leaving him atop a buidling. Yes, I do love them and I think the functional/dysfunctional relathionship is needed in both their lives. It helps that they seem so in character for me.



Ami, I love Ami when she gets her wits and uses that tongue that takes people aback. I did say she can be like a mother hen, but also a wolf backed into the corner. She has bite when she wants to. Trowa, I can't say how much you make me love Trowa. He's so himself. He ois so stoic but can give small flashes of emotion that the guessing game of when to reveal such things is all part of the fun and drustration with him.




I had to say, about Makoto and Heero, I like them being in the hospital together. No one can just get up and mangle the other and are forced to listen to each other. It will create something nice in the long run And I had to laugh at the idea of them becoming vampires. I still think it is a possibility as they both had suspicious bites in the same place.




I can't wait to see the drama unfold in the next chapter and, hopefully, I will have somethign updated by then ;). Keep up the good work, you're an awesome writer.

WOW! This story is EXTREMELY interesting! If i could, I think my review would be in all caps xD lol
But the plot and the writing style just pulls me in and I don't ever want to stop reading. Good job with the story! I can't wait to read more ^^

Yes! Duo's OUT! And Duo confronting Heero... oh, I can't wait! Especially because Duo and Quatre are the only ones who remember. I look forward to seeing how you have the G-boys interact internally and externally while regaining their memories. And what the girls will think when they find out the truth. I look forward to it, and will be happy to see how you portray Setsuna and Hotaru.

Yay! I love this story so much. This chapter was very good.

I think my favorite was the Ami/Trowa segment. They were both kept in character very well. It surprises me that you say Trowa is hard for you to write. I think you write him perfectly. Much better than I do, for sure. It is hard to balance him out, along with Rei and Heero. Especially when you want them to be emotional (not including serious or angry of course, because that it their element).

Wufei and Minako are cute, too. I love it. Actually, what I love is your characterization of Wufei. No one, and I mean NO ONE, writes him as good as you do. It is awesome!

Of course, I loved the conversation between Haruka, Michiru, and Rei. I really want to know the rift between Usagi and Rei. She seems so bitter.

Makoto and Heero got a good chunk of the chapter, and I enjoyed it. You write them well together. Their personalities in your story compliment each other nicely.

All in all it rocked my face off. Please update soon!

-ROF

Oh wow, that was so NOT what I was expecting! I thought it'd be some crazy human who'd taken over the yoma, not a vapmy-thing! Hm... is it a fusion of human and yoma? A result of the unpredicted world-wide-scale big freeze? And don't worry, that was definately high up on the creepy/scary scale, oh dear! Once again I think your character portraly is simply amazing. You've managed to catch the obsessive side of Ami quite well, as you do with the emotional side of Rei.
Yeah, Trowa can be hard to write, I know. I once wrote a story where I forgot about him for 3 whole chapters! I felt so terrible and paid extra attention from then on! But one thing that helps me is to think of him like an animal. Yes, he has human emotions and thought, but his behavior is much like an animal- able to sense threats and good at fading into a crowd. He's calm and confident, and all of it just reminds me of an animal. If that rant helps or even makes any sense...
Anyway I'm still loving the twists you spring us with! It was a very welcome way to relax after a hectic first day of school!

Is it any wonder I am inspired to write better and get those chapters out quicker? Lol, you constantly amaze me. I did notice a few typos (but we both know I am far worst at it). It did not distract from the reading so don't worry about it.

Oh my dear, the segment with the youma/monster had me at the edge of my seat. I was scared for Makoto and Heero. The action was fast and furious (not literally) like it would actually feel if one was in the same situation. It had ardeline pumping and had me closing my eyes, fearful of what may happen next. Looks like out senshi have a bit more than just the average youma to deal with. The panic Makoto felt, to me, was real. When we're in the situation, our heads telling us to run but our body is in a state of shock. It's a real life happenstance.

The talk between Uranus, Neptune and Mars was very insightful. Uranus and Michiru wanted to keep living their lives and felt that they would only be senshi when needed (I understand that) Rei, lots going on in her head, has something more depthful and it seems to have something to do with Usagi. Hm, seems like more is starting to add up.

You know I'm a sucker for Minako/Wufei scenes(me and my love for perfect pairings such as this). Minako has always been rumored to have a bit of empathis abilities or small psychic ones. I wonder if she felt the danger Makoto was in or what was going on. Wufei being concerned (then playing it off like it was for the good of the king and queen) made me smile.

Ami, such a good heart, always willing to help out. She is always a surprise when she acts out of what people expect and I adore her for that. Trowa, I think you write him amazingly well, I could have slapped him for his handling of her, but now (Inside I am smiling evilly) he has to deal with an unconcious Ami and I wonder how she'll react when she wakes up.

Yay, more yummy fatness for me! Lol, I can't wait for the next update. I should have one of my own chapters out in a couple of days. I'll look forward to your review and to reading more of yours soon!! ;) Let's get 'em girl!

Poor naive Wufei, baby doesn't know when he's got it bad. Usually people pair him with Rei because they both have such fiery tempers, but I've fallen in love with how you're paring together Wufei and Minako, based on their way of thinking, because I think those two are terribly similar in a strange way. Same for Quatre and Rei, and the other couples that seem to be developing, though it could all change.
I'm part of the fab four? AWSOME! It's probably just because I talk (er, type, I guess...) too much, lol.
Oh dear, Mamoru is gonna find out. Whoopsie! And yes, I'm happy Hotaru and Setsuna showed up. Hopefully they can help Trowa remember, and get Usagi back to the way she was (though I can deal with her not screaming at everything and being a pathetic wimp).
As always, I can't wait for the next part of this beautiful story to unfold!

Aw, this made my day so much better! :]

I LOVED your Rei segment! It was my favorite, but then again, go figure. I like her persona here. She is stuck between her new and old self, which is essentially causing her to have an identity crisis. I loved the ReiQuatre in it too, I might add. I really like your characterization of him.

Minako and Wufei cracked me up. I loved it. The 'peas' added so much to their relationship and I am so glad it happened.

Please update this soon. Really.

-ROF

P.S. I would be honored to be apart of the Fantastic Four! ;]

Lol, Fantastic Four huh? Hm..it fits so well too.


Professionalism, smefessionalism. We writers can get crazy too. Plus Setsuna, like we mentioned, is a mysterious character. No clue what she might do next, lol. But for me she was spot on and you did her amazingly well that I am envious and will probably read your chapter continiously so that way I don't botch her in my own story.

Hotaru, she seems confident. She might have inherited from Haruka. But it is a refreshing side of her and I wonder where she has been and what she's been up to? I'm sure that'll tie in when it's revealed over what exactly happened between the senshi.

You positively delight me with the scene between Wufei and Minako. Minako woke up and seemed her old self again, very carefree. Minako and Duo are a lot alike (Another usual couple *rolls eyes*), they both cna be smiling and outgoing but they can be serious too. I think Wufei gave Minako a relief from all that is going on. I'm also going to comment on their relationship. I go back and you can see the contemptment and dislike, but there is still a sense of grudging respect. There is more now it seems and it'll be funny how they both go through the new changes in their relationship. Lot's of fun to write that one!!

Rei, as many people opinonned, is a confident, passionate girl. But you took her another level. Not many dare go beneath the surface and take Rei's fears. Rei admired her two crows because they were uncaged and did not have to worry over the silly ways of human emotion at times. Rei has always loved her freedom, she might have obligations but she has never felt like they held her down. But the way you took her fears and intwined that with how palace life could be it was brilliance to exploit that part of her. A character growth, and well played too.

Quatre and Trowa, those two seem to be caught up in something now because of our newly revealed senshi. Saving the universe huh? Possibly has something to do with the senshi perhaps? Lol, I know, in due time.

Usagi and Mamoru, I can see, have a major fight coming there way. By the way you portrayed them earlier they seemed alienated in their marriage and not just with their friends. When he finds out about her visits to Duo I'm sure that will not be pretty.

This chapter was enlightening and still leaves me hungering for more answers. I held my breath and anticipate the next chapter. I am seriously becoming addicted to your stories.

Wanna share a bit of that vanilla icecream with the Oreos on top? I think you added a cherry! Lol, til next time, I egarly and humbly await more of your brilliant works.

Yes, you delivered plenty of juicy info in this chapter. I was happy to see it updated. Lol, I know what you mean. I get anxious and I feel like just moving things along. You didn't which showed amazing professionalism.

I do wonder more on what had went down between the scouts. Minako is upset with them and Usagi seems not as friendly.

Wufei was a nice surprise. I smiled when he showed up in his own comforting way.

Usagi visits Duo in the dungeon? Wow, scandalious. What does Mamo have to say about that.

You keep me at the edge of my seat. I can't wait for more. Thank you.

I am so excited for another update on this. This story is so deep and thought stimulating. Each character is given a tremendous amount of depth, backstories and current situations that make their current lives exceedingly difficult. You did this so well and stayed true to their personalities. For that I applaud you!

I am really looking forward to some more updates!

-ROF

Someone finally aknowledged WuFei's softer side, thank you! It seems that in many stories Heero and Trowa get depth, but Duo is only a fool and WuFei only a stuck-up jerk. It's so refreshing to see a story that truly gives them the depth they have. I am still in love with your portrayl of Duo, he's so deep. He has a silent visiter, with every chapter the haze of mystery and illusion thickens as it teases with small answers. It is truly a well woven tale and I look forward to seeing where it goes next!

The minako/wufei interaction makes me smile. I've never seen wufei depicted as someone who is concerned and superstitious...but i appreciate his character. He isn't depicted in this chap as someone who screams his head off. I'm really curious as to who they are against with because it's speculated they might be against a human doing, right? anyway, wish you'll update soon again ne.
BTW, whye is mamoru all alone in the bed in the middle of the night?