I love Beyonce's song "Halo" and this fanfiction suited the song very well. I was really impressed. I don't often read songfics because they have no originality whatsoever, but your story has surpassed my expectations.
Esshh, I sound like a flamer. But I really like this story, :D
Hoping to read more NaruHina stories,
Moonfayth

Aw! That was too cute! I was actually listening to Halo before I even read this oneshot. My eyes always tear up when I hear the song, and this oneshot almost made me cry. So cute...

I've always seen this song to be a KibaHina or GaaraSaku theme song, but the song fit the NaruHina pairing as well. Good job! =3

~*BakaNekoShojo*~