Woah. Isn't Dawn meant to be dead? Or was Lizzie just imagning it in the previous chapter? Loving the way this story is going!

aw, she shouldn't ahve died!

suicide is NEVER the answer. unfortunately... a lot of peopel do think that is.

you dont' need a thesaurus to write! you already write really well! your description is way better than mine, and i've been writing for like 8 years.

wow she was going to kill herself? i feel like she could have just told batman her problem and she would have been able to avoid everythign that happened afterwards...

onto the next and final chapter. i really thought this story was going to be longer!

sorry it's been so long since i reviewed! i was only able to read half the chapter last time, and now i finished the other half. hmm... it seems like the joker had everything pre-planned, even though to her it seemed all spontaneous. but how could the joker know of batman and fox's relationship? that's not possible, is it? ok i'm going to read the next chapter.

i hope everything is okay with you. did i make you mad by not reviewing for so long? i wonder if you still wanna read my story. it's getting close to the breaking point.

hi... i had no idea you had already put up so many chapters. i thought i put this story on alert!

what a crazy erratic poison! off to read the next chapter...

OK! MY LAST ONE I SAID SHE LOST IT... NOW...NOW.. HOLY ** I DONT KNOW!
SHES LIKE COMPLETELY LOST IT! THIS IS NUTS! WHA HAVE U TURNED LIZZIE INTO!! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU! BATMAN BETTER STOP LOOKING IN HIS MIRROR AND HELP LIZZIE. NOW!
selfish bastard...

shes offically lost it...
my god...
Awsome though!
BATMAN HELP HER! YOU SELFISH BASTARD...leaving her there...doesnt he have any sense? SHES A MASS MURDERUR!
all brawn...no brains...*sigh*

hm...
i dont think it is finished but bloody hell this sounds great!

she is definitely crazy. i wonder whta he's gassing or dosing her with to make her like this.

but if she isnt' really crazy, how come she can't stop him before he poisons her? it just sort of comes and goes.

wow that's freaky! she killed her own friend. how long was she out? why did she kill dawn? i'm going to go read the next chapter!

hey, this stuff sounds more like scarecrow stuff than joker stuff. worst fears? hallucinations? sounds like fear night from batman begins. but omg this story is so awesome! i think it's way better than the other story, beauty and the beast. keep going i want to read more! you're so descriptive when you write.

Your character doesn't really sound insane. Oh well, it's just the first one.

Agree with the first reviewer! I loved the "non insane people" line. xP

hey, you put the story up! :D

you need to have a lot more stuff up to read though. your author's note is longer than your prologue! people don't have much to say about such a short story, you know what i mean?