Oh this was great story, full of creep moments.
Great job, I'm looking forward to reading the next ones.

Ja ne

Ok, I just finished reading this entire story and I don't have a clue what to say, so, err... prepare yourself for this.
This fic was awesome. Amazing and fantastic and a bit of a lifesaver. It got me through close to two weeks of end of year exams, dozens of assignments, late nights, bucket-loads of stress, headaches and sickness. I was banned from the computer for the past week too haha, so I now have about ten chapters printed in my room that got a *lot* of wear.
When I started reading Hail Valley, I think I read somewhere up to twelve chapters in one go, and I put off reviewing, so I'm really sorry about that! I can't stop thinknig how much I love it though, you're an outstanding writer, I'm so glad to hear there's more coming, honestly.
I have to admit though, while reading I did spot some mistakes, and if you'd like I can [slowly] go back and point them out. Also, if there's anything about this or your next fic [which I probably shouldn't start reading today] that you want to discuss, feel free to message me, I love talking about stories I adore.
So... I'll end this rather long review with an enormous, heartfelt Thank You, for writing such an awesome fic, keeping me sane and continuing to write. Also, I promise I'll be reviewing Collista Lake chapter by chapter, so you'll get my thoughts and insight on that [haha, I'm not sure whether or not to apologise in advance for that].
With all my thanks [and promises], yours faithfully,
blue

i really enjoyed this story! i think you did an excellent job on it. i also look forward to reading the next chapter of the sequal.

TBS Juri

I sat down to read this story and practically read it in one shot. I couldn't stop reading it! It was extremely well written (some spelling errors and such every so often, but that's really no matter) and obviously well thought out- a rare combination to find (especially on ). I absolutely loved this story. ^_^

Is that Tsubasa Sakura? It certainly seems like her...does that mean that this will cross-over with the Tsubasa gang? That would be SO cool if it did. Especially with Fai and Kurogane. *Is excited* You should do that.

Wo! I haven't finished reading this story yet, I'm only up to Chapter 27, but I love it. I love how the development between Kurogane and Fai's is slow and they don't jump into the sack straight away.

I mean, of course, I was like 'just do it!' when they got interrupted and stuff, but I was kinda glad the relationship had time to develop!

Love your stuff!

*is eagerly waiting for the sequel and frequently lurking around for updates* :D

oh, please! i love this story! make a sequel! KUROFYE4EVER! X3
i wanna know what will happen in that lake!

I loved this fanfic, It was so well written. It was nice to come a cross a good KuroFai fic. You keeped me in suspense the whole time. I was glad i found it after it was completed so i didn't have to wait for it to be updated. Keep writing you are amazing.

Its so sad that this has already ended..but as you've said..it has to end..

And.. I love the ending!! Specialy when Kuro said two more minutes..hmm..it made me smile.. :D

I'm pretty sure ALL of us would be thrilled by Hail Valley's second installment.. we'll be waiting.. :))

Thanks for the hard work..
Thanks for writing wonderful and scary (at the same time) fic about our fav couple..:))

untill next time..

:)

Hah, I totally knew it'd be worth lurking around your account to see if you'd update! Thanks for making my day a lot happier~!

I really can't wait to see what'll happen. This camping trip sounds a lot more interesting than the summer holiday option. :D
Oh, and I definitely want to see more crossing over with other works of CLAMP, please? *puppy eyes* Perhaps Umi, Fuu and Hikaru from Rayearth could pop for a visit? Or something else?

And yay for haunted lakes~! I'd also love to see the 'mysterious five', aka the real Tsubasa gang lurk in some corner, if that's possible. :) Watch out for the white feathers, Kuro-pi and Fai... I'd also love to see some SyaoranxSakura cuteness <3

...but it's all up to you to decide, I'll happily read and review all that you'll write! Post when you have time and I hope you'll do well with your school work!

~Huilisti

I actually like this idea better than the road trip one! :D

Don't worry about it being done before. What matters if it's executed well. I'm actually eager to read the sequel when you're able to do it. I honestly think it sounds promising.

Corrections:

{If I explained to Kurogane that I blamed myself for the death of my father, he’s probably get angry and scold me for such an imbecilic statement.} Correct me if I'm wrong, but "he's" should be "he'd."

{It hit me then, the feeling that I’d begged myself not remember this morning.} I believe "to" should be between "not" and "remember."

{“Hey.” He said calmly, touching a finder to the corner of my tear-filled eye.} I noticed that you wrote "finger" in another sentence after it. I'm just wondering if "finder" in this sentence is intentional.

{“Really? I mean, I know that I’ve been acting strangely when it comes to… this. It’s not that I don’t want to– I do want to. Intimacy is very… its… well, I’m just not in the right–”} "its" should be "it's."

sounds like fun! i can't wait to see what will happen ^_^

This sounds great!
Please, write the story!
I want to read more!

A new chapter ! Thank you Thank you Thank you...