Yay! You're making it a story! Can't wait for more.

Seems good so far.

“Those groups of fox-dung,”]

What in Sean's Hell is that? Groups of fox-dung... The **.

I'm sorry, but after that first quote I couldn't even read anymore. That was just terrible. I love the title, but this fiction alone is 'absolute' **. [/solemn] No offense, but I don't know why anybody would like this. Unless they have an irritable fetish for short; grammar abusive stories like this.

Otherwise, I wouldn't recommend this to anybody that likes this fandom.

I give Elite a 1.5.

Keep on rockin' Kiddo,
Hawk/Sinister

O. That was excelent. Keep up the good work.

Intresting...
1st chapie soon?? ^.^

This is pretty good. I can't wait for the first chapter