Yeah, Jake was kind of a douche, but everything else was great (all things considered). I really liked the math bits, those were a nice touch.

*throws things at Jake* Arsehole! I loved it; the math-y bits were a nice touch.

Poor Seth.
I love the formular ^^

~IP~

Too bad Seth and Edward don't end up togather. But great nontheless.

I loved the "chapter" titles. But will no one give them a happy ending?!? TT^TT

Aw,bull spit!But i was warned...ANGST!Shouldve known.But thats Seth were talkin about!Cant believe that especially Jacob.Stupid butt muncher! Hes just jealous he cant get a piece of those burnin buns of steel!Lol!But rlly.Nice i was looking for a SXE and i found it.Great job

i love it. you are such a good writer. i love all for your storys. i love you!

Excellent.

it's just lovely. i really liked the titles and the summary sentence :D

One word.
Awsome.

I think I want Jacob to go to hell. But at the same time a tiny bit of me also wants Edward to go to hell because it's like Seth's playing the price all alone here. In the end, Edward still gets to have his happy ending while Seth just deals with more heartache. Awesome job. I toally enjoyed reading it. :)

Poor Seth

Nice. I liked it.
I'm sorry, I don't really know anything else to say. ^^'

X~X~X Celia ~~

ah! *sobs*

Normally I don't like stories that seem anti-Jacob but this is really good. I hope you write a sequel.