Holy crap, that was intense. Fantastic story; really well-written.

I adored the interactions John had with his friends and even Atlantis. Your characterizations were very good as well. Thanks so much for sharing.

Eek! Nice job on the Shep whumping and the agony of waiting for rescue.

Well done!

I could just see that blade against his throat and man, that was intense! Good writing and such suspense. Thanks.

As usual, another wonderfully written story. Loved the 'space sperm'/squid debate. I'm on the squid side.
Dear lord, complete laugh-out-loud moment when Rodney says, "Really, I can’t leave this place for a moment before the chimpanzees come out with the sledgehammers."
I would say that the SGA writers should immediately bring you on board, but well, you know...(*big sigh*).
Thanks for keeping SGA alive. :)

Very suspenseful story. You brought the building to life. Terrific imagery.

Very nicely done! Kept the suspense up and you managed to incorporate Lorne and Zelenka in the story with Ronon and Teyla thrown in! I love John and like having the other characters in the story. Good job!

This was great and omg the throat stuff had me scared stiff!

Oh, I like this! I love the interactions with John's men (especially Lorne). Having Woolsey and Zelenka as well as the team was a nice treat. Nicely done!

Very, nice, and very intense. John almost getting skewered had me clinging to every word, and now my arm aches from the tension. And I liked that Rodney had the decency to realize what had almost happened to John, and acknowledge it. I adore a worried Rodney :D

Well done! I knew you couldn't kill off Sheppard, but you still had me at the edge of my seat! Lorne and Zelenka were just right; I never could get enough of them on the show. Of course they wouldn't wait for Rodney, any of them--and of course he'd give them heck about it.

I love the idea that they've found a drone-manufacturing (breeding?) area and it's only about 43% damaged, so they can use it again!

Oh, and the drones? The first time I saw them, on SG-1, I remembered and yelled a slogan I'd seen on a t-shirt in college: "Spermies! Swim for your life!" I'm only surprised more of the characters didn't think of that!

It's never too late for a Secret Santa offering and this was great. What a unique story line and totally different situation to place John in. I like both Lorne and Radek so to see them there, too, was great, and of course for Ronon and Teyla to join the fun added the cream to the bun. The only missing link (!) was Rodney who naturally had to storm in at the end only to realise that his friend was looking like hell and had almost died. I liked the ending as the friends reaffirmed that they really did care for each other, in spite of appearances.

Kitty =^-^=

I really liked this. The tension and intensity was insane with that broken screen hanging over John's neck. Well done! I loved that John was hurt and in a dire situation, but in the end, not seriously hurt. Excellent!!

I really enjoyed this fic and LOVED the interaction between Lorne, Zelenka and Sheppard! Definitely one I'll read again...and again...and...

That was absolutely wonderful and the most satisfying and fantastic whump EVER! Brilliant, can't say enough about the pacing, the tone...the dialogue was entertaining and hilarious. Perfect. And the near decapitation - very unique whumpage, my friend. Thank you for writing this!