Absolutely brilliant story. It is refreshing to read something so original.

I really like this story, I hope you update soon.

Brilliant! I look forward to your next chapter!

I loved it! I can't wait for more! Pretty please update soon!

Well, this is frustrating. Here I am, trying to do calculus and I can't take my eyes of your dang story. It's brilliant, hope you write loads more!

really good story so far. i'm gonna carry on reading :D

It's nice to see them make an effort to save Luna's mom. I hope they succeed. Perhaps this is a foreshadowing of a future Harry/Luna as well? Not really pushing for a pairing, since no ship fics are always better than ships muddling them, but if I were to choose one, I'd choose HPLL anyday.

Can't understand their relationship with the Unspeakables though. Too cooperative perhaps? Shouldn't they should be more on guard, having the secrets they have? They should take control of the situation, set ground rules, a set of tests then leave us alone kind of deal, then focus on their lives. Their mission in the first place.

Giving more spotlight on the OCs give me a feeling that they returned back in time and a lot of the canon characters died to make way for OC-face time. Sad.

A lot of the scenes get repetitive, because they're getting told from OC and canon characters' POVs. Then the Prophet repeats the same thing in their news. I would've preferred to read it in the Prophet instead and skipped the insignificant opinions of the OCs.

I like the cute Dumbledore and Harry moments though. That's the only reason I'm still reading this.

Not really a big fan of this chapter. Or any other future chapter involving OCs and whatever they're doing, judging from this entire chapter dedicated to OCs.

Hope there'll be less of these and more Harry and Dumbledore-focused ones.

hi, i'd just like to say that i'm really enjoying it. cant wait for the next update!
small question: what's going on with Dakota? has she left the story completely? was the point of her being there just so that she could leave and make space for rita? or is she still involved...
again, great story
keep it up :D

i really enjoyed this story. I read all of the available chapters last night.
I like that harry still has his childish and he's not just pure adult in a kids body. I like seeing the struggle. I'm curious about narcissia wearing the necklace, i'm sure it will effect her negativly if she wears it long enough. I really kind of hope that dumbledore senses it, but i guess hse wont be attending the party..only draco.
There is so much to speculate about. I do hope that you continue to update and be modivated with this story.

I hate that no one suspects Narcissa of anything. It's like she couldn't have possibly had anything to do with anything cause she is the wife and a mother.
Besides that, I really liked the story.

"Xenophilius Lovegood opted to skip the Prophet in favor of some real news, namely the Quibbler’s article on heliopaths (magical fire beasts) invading the Ministry."

...Xeno's take on the attack is hilarious, and dead on.

Excellent!

Hwow I love this story. I can't wait to see Harry's birthday. Good chapter.