I've read it all and I love it. I'm a fan of anyone and Darcy, so I'm enjoying your story. I bet some one saw them and will be snitching to Peter.

m spinner/darcy yummy-ness. i love it, and need more please! :)

aww loving this story :) i love Darcy, and all the Sparcy in it! Peter seriously must die!
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You are, without a doubt one of the best writers on this site. Your writing puts people IC and your use of language is almost poetic. I'm impressed, and thats difficult to do.
Now, while I have to admit I like Darcy with Peter, (I really think they belong together) I'm intrigued to see where you will take this. Because as long as Jane doesn't exist, I'm not entierly opposed to the idea of her with Spinner again either. So, write more, update soon, whatever, I look foward to it. :)

ah boo! i love this so far!
I wish the show would've happened like this! I miss sparcy so much!
I love that they're IC unlike how DTNG is now lol
Cant wait for more!

You really have a lot of potential here. Unfortunately it is also very hard to read with the dialog clumped together. You must separate between speakers.

all i have to say: I LOVED THAT ENDING. i'm a sucker for final lines that like punch you in the face, powerful ones that stick, that are haunting...and that one was pretty much all of the above. :D