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Shortie Smallz
2009-11-30 . chapter 18
i know it not a hitaus notice but i really love this story i wish i could finish writing it for u but im not a writer.. and oh i read the other story a child in the night beautiful beautiful story! :0 keep writing hopefully in the future ull become a writer.
hopefully ull feel better cuz i know ppl love this story their stupid if they dont.
if u could least put up a chapter for me ill appreciate very much. I miss reading it it saddens me.

farwell
omgahitsbritt08
2009-11-29 . chapter 18
Thanks, for letting us readers know. Most writers/authors wouldnt even put one up. Thanks. =]
Leah Nessie Clearwater
2009-11-29 . chapter 1
i lobe the age chart at the beginning it's funny and complicated
~!*Leah
jaspergirl12
2009-11-29 . chapter 7
i love it
dancers of the night
2009-11-28 . chapter 18
Your story is so great...and sad at the same time. I love it. I hope they do get to see each other again. I really do hope so. Update when ya can.^^
sora kinomoto
2009-11-27 . chapter 18
I really like this story! I hope you'll decide to continue it someday =D
SwimmingTwilightLover96
2009-11-27 . chapter 18
this story is so sweet! and its so touchign i almost cried. (PS I'm a sap) its so good, and if u ever get the chance to update you should because this is a great story :)
Emmett's-baby-girl-since1915
2009-11-24 . chapter 18
PLEASE UPDATE i luv it
PoisonousYellowTulip
2009-11-23 . chapter 18
Love this story but you need to update soon. Anyways, awsome story, it's one of my favorites.
MyMonkeyMan1995
2009-11-22 . chapter 18
UPDATE!
ACndCA
2009-11-22 . chapter 18
Your story is really good!

U made me cry!

I hope you keep writing, I mean, I would love to see the story complete even if you only updated once a month.

Ur story is 2 freakin good to end in a bad way !

I need to see what comin with Esme and all.

Ur story is one of the best I've read about Alice and Jasper (all human), and believe me I've read a lot of them!

Please keep writing it and update soon!

ACndCA
jasper lover
2009-11-21 . chapter 18
hey! i have an account and i subbed this story, i just didnt feel like signing in to write this... ANYWAY i just wanted to let you no that i read this a while ago and would love to see a new chapter:) great jobb(:
Highqueen Julietta
2009-11-20 . chapter 7
oh, that was so sad =(
*cries*
omg, poor jasper!
HQJ
Highqueen Julietta
2009-11-20 . chapter 2
what the HELL? 4.619 reviews? wow!
well, no wonder- its an amazing story!
love it. Little Jasper is so cute...
HQJ
MARIANA
2009-11-17 . chapter 4
I LOVE ALICE AND JASPER STORYS KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ;) , ALSO I LIKE THE PART AT THE BEGGING OF THE STORY PLEASE CONTINUE
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