Comma Splice.

Interesting progression. This... is an excelent piece of work =)

Hey, guessing? I really don't have any guessing right now, sorry. It looks like this Geri Fox is beyoth type, oh lord!

Wow... this was brilliant!

I like chelsea, she's interesting, and deep enough to avoid mary-sueage. (or is that mary-sewage? ;-) )

And the bit at the end "Our little Odie's growing up" So hilarious.

Hey, I got a question.
Do the chapter titles are all, like, song titles? Coz I listen to a LOT of songs and they so happen to have the same title.
Except your latest chapter, did you change the 'heels' to 'feet'?

Another interesting chapter, you really have brilliant ideas do you? I wish I had your brain. Lily calling Herry, "Hercules" was fun or the word "babe" was pretty cool. But please continue it's getting better.

aw! That was so totally cute! OMG I loved it! Keep writing!

Update soon!

Bella x

Aw, that is so cute! I love it

A very good job on this story, so far I love it like crazy. Where did you get an idea like that? Very interesting, please update as fast as you can possible *winks* And inventing those new characters was brilliant, a girlfriend for Herry and Odie, nice... very nice.

*still trying to hold the laugher*

But it was still very funny at some point like when Archie and Neil said, "Odie has a girlfriend, Odie has a girlfriend". And Neil and Archie fighting over a movie? O-o, that's not good but cool enough. And very nice for inventing this adress stuff, great work. I'm puting this in my favorites and puting you as my favorite aurthur *smiles as blushing to the ears*