Aw I liked this =) and I agree, I think it would be interesting to see if Jack found out, and if Ianto met John again... =)
But very good writing =D well done x

I think this would make a good full length - I mean, Jack finding out...

Well, just a thought. ;)

Insanity

Ooh, I really love this! It's a cool idea, and well done. Great work! :)