What a beautiful ending, Great job. I'm tearing up.

Oh, and I have good news, I'm a godmother!

aw that was cute.

It's even better the second time! ;D

Aww, I'm so sad that it's over... :C But still, uber incredible chappie, Greenie! Not to mention the fact that it was, dare I say it, Trindsayriffic! :3 Awesome, awesome, AWESOME!

Aw... that was one of the cutests things I've ever read.

Aw! Happy ending. :) I absolute loved this Greenie...though there were bits and pieces of words missing here and there. It was still awesome. :)

wow this has potential.

awesome!

This is really sweet, and well-written. I hope you post more soon!

Why must you leave us with these cliffhangers!? And Chris divorced TWELVE times!

I hope the plan works out.

Yay, uber awesome chappie! I especially liked the park scene. :3 Hmm... I wonder what Lindsay's plan is... :D PPMS!

this story is very awesome!

good story. trent/lindsay is a nice change to see. Update soon.

Hey hey :D
Okay, you've got a great story going on here, but I agree with FilipinaVii (ZOMG IT'S MA HOME DAWG)... you've got to add some meat and context to your story. It IS a good story, and you ARE a good writer compared to some other stories I've read, but you're rushing a bit and missing some great chances to develope and explore the emotions of your characters.
Writing is about expression and developement, and exploration of a world other then the one you're in. If you rush threw it blindly, you don't take enough time to explore the subtilty and joys of being a great writer.
I understand you tried your best -- and I see great effort here. That alone makes you so much better then some other writers, but again, you're missing some bulk and detail here. I'll give you an example, if you wish, from you're own story.

"Lindsay winked at the camera. She turned, posed again and flashed a sultry smile in the other direction. This kept up for a while, but soon enough, Lindsay was done with her photo shoot and she walked off the set, grabbing her robe and a water bottle. The crystal clear liquid felt like paradise down her throat."

Okay, your last line was good. I like how you got the visual down of how drinking the water felt, but you should add why it felt like "paradise" to her. Maybe explain that the photoshoot went on so long she was dying of thirst. You should've also explained some emotions as to what she was feeling while doing the photoshoot, instead of simply writing what she was doing. Y'know? Explain why she loves modeling so much. Maybe she likes feeling beautiful in front of a camera, or she loves going to different exotic locations... you chose, it's your story. All I'm saying is you should explore your characters.

I hope I helped :) If you need any tips or whatever, or if you need some editing help for your next chapter don't hesitate to contact me.

Best of luck,
Veronica.

Wow, I feel bad for Lena right now. I'm glad Lindsay stopped hating herself though. And Chris, he deserves it.