hehe, i see, griever has a temporary new home ;) nice fic :)

oh poor griever XD bad seifer, bad bad seifer! *waves finger*

XD guess this wasn't how seifer'd planned it XD happy to see you keep the rivalry up there, too :)

you really make me exited as well :)

hehe, very straight foreward :D

Again, author's notes are not supposed to be uploaded as individual chapters. These spaces are supposed to be for real literary content.

However interesting, I find this a bit too obvious. I understand that there is a word limit...but still...

The stages are stated a bit too obviously, unless that is part of the terms of the challenge.

Interesting...

You do realize that posting author's notes as chapters is against the rules, right?

er...not too sure about the Irvine and Squall part..but I'm definitely happy with the SeiferxSquall...XD perhaps if Irvine and him didn't really do too much...or Squall's more dominant in that relationship *cough*seme*cough* if it gets that far...XD I'll be waiting for the one on Sunday! and hoping that you'll continue to post as often as you did for this one too...lol. =D

YAY I got what I wanted! Novel fic yes!! I'm so happy thank you. x3

And for chapter 6... How exactly like Squall to just leave... though I'm wondering about the Griever Pendant and how all of that will play into the story. :D Ooh I can't wait!

sounds like it will be an interesting story

Oh a new chapter!! Very steamy. I like the little tidbits of the story we get. My imagination runs wild lmao

No please keep writing these! They are great little snippets. I wish they were longer. *big grin* I love it!