Wow nice 1-shot I really liked it!

veronica! bat ayaw mong gumawa tungkol kay sunako?XD

I like the Last part whahahaahah it's suprisingly exciting

Gosh that was a cool one! though i kinda shy-ed out from the kissing part.. my cousin joked me about it, saying "hindi k lng marunong gumawa ng kissing scene eh.." ahm.. tingnan lng natin..hehe..

ha! and poor inoue, SO pathetic!

maytatanung lang ako? bat gaun kaikli? pRang bitin... konti ang details... haha juk lang..

dagdagan m0 pa ung kissing scene.. nxt time sa iba naman.. ung mas grabe..

maam leny ba ito?

aha

oi, c0ntinue in writing stories as long as they are sensible...

malay m0 y0u will be given an opp0rtuity to write st0ries..

ge, g0 b0i..

keep up the g0od w0rk!

G0d Bless!

tsk tsk tsk...*blushes*lower my head and take a deep breath*ready to yell
OMG!

TAT'S THE BEST AND MOST ROMATIC ONESHOT ICHIRUKI I'VE EVER READ!

kya...

tat's so awesome sweetie...

I love you!

XD

aww thats so sweet!

Hahaha! Boo for Orihime! (I really don't like her
fluffy story, i love it

Kissa

at hindi na detailed ung *_* na scene ha! buti u realized na it was a big gross... joke hahahahahahahahahahahaha repeat gross ung scene na un! galing mo gumawa bride of byakuya!

hoy babae may betareader ka ba talaga! ok oo nga pla ako un pero ndi ko na care na may typo ka hahaha how to spell explaining ba! read again ur article that's the only flaw...

Aw this is so cute! XD They would hurt each other like that, even in the middle of confessing!)

great job