I love this. t-chan is soooo cute. I think it sooo should have been a ranma/shampoo/kasumi/ucchan though.

::roflmao:: This was awesome! Ranma as a smilodon! ::rolls::

Question: Was there a "Catch Scratch" story or is it simply that you shortened the title of yours when you mentioned that Tagan-san was dropping things? If there is a similar story, I'd sure like to read it.

Thanks for sharing!

Reading from the back of the list: Thoroughly enjoyed this one!

"Looks like its when that Tatewaki Kuno fellow has gotten his hands on the Wishbringer. A fourth class magical object capable of granting Limited Wishes. It certainly qualifies as divergent..."

[A convenient device and one I'm surprised more writers haven't made use of.]

"You wish," said Akane, striking Kuno.

"What an excellent idea," thought Kuno as he landed.

[The Black Wind howls...]

"...really big damn predator," finished the Jusenkyo Guide

[Points: 1]

Soun was still a terrified lump whose hair was sticking out at odd angles and

didn't answer.

[Points: 1]

He'd obviously chosen to approach the right person now, because he was getting FOOD! (Always an important consideration.)

[That is just like almost every pet I've had, cat and dog.]

looking 1300 pound tiger

[The plus sign is generally connected directly to the number.]

and then it hadlicked her!

[Spacing: had licked]

another Deep Thought. How...

Akane stopped as she lifted the rinsing bucket. Her mind went into replay mode.

[Points: 5]

Ranma said, reaching for a rice cracker as that youngest girl went running past the doorway with her dumb-bell. Strange family.

[Points: 1]

"Please forgive my sister. She's a very sweet girl, if a violent maniac."

[Points: 10. It's been a long time since I laughed that hard.]

Ever since Akane had gotten lost at Ryugenzawa, in fact.

[Nice subtle tie-in.]

Kuno overhearing Akane complain about the lack of suitable sparring partners had sparked the morning battles, proving that even good things often went bad.

[I can't say why, but I found that little line funny.]

Kuno looked at the beast standing next to Akane Tendo and wanted a bigger

bokken. Or a daikyu.

[Points: 2]

Odd, the way the growl was pitched,it sounded similar to the way someone mutters

under their breath.

[Points: 1]

"YOU ANIMAL! How dare you engage yourself to Kasumi Tendo as a ruse to pursue

the fair Akane?"

[Points: 2]

Kuno exclaimed, jumping out with somewhat less grace.

['Somewhat']

Ranma snapped his body into a roll and twist, and touched down on the side of the pool, perfectly dry. He stood up, arms proudly held out. "Ta da!"

Kuno's splash sent water everywhere.

[Points: 2]

"Z." He didn't particularly want to catch that butterfly, it was the

chase that was important.

[Points: 1]

Cookies? Even barbarian martial artist sabretooth tigers liked chocolate chip cookies.

[Points: 1]

"ACK! PHTHTHTH! Cat germs! I've been slobbered on! Ah! Doctor Tofu!

I've got cat germs! Somebody get some antiseptic. Ak! Pew! Icky!"

[I had a flashback to the Peanuts cartoon.]

"HE'S LAZY! HE'S GREEDY! HE'S SNEAKY!"

"Yeah," said Nabiki, agreeing with her sister but not seeing what the problem

was.

[Points: 1]

T-chan noted the presence of another playmate. Could there be more? Oh joy!

[Points: 1]

The next best cook (an important consideration from Ranma's point of view) was Shampoo, then Nabiki.

[So like a cat. Points: 1]

Damn Japanese language, couldn't they talk Chinese like civilized people?

[Points: 1]

increasing the amount of submersion in the Nekoken from 20 to 60.

[If you placed percent signs, QuickEdit eats those.]

"Whatever, killing nonwarriors doesn't exactly sit well with me either. To Ga, you want to help Ki Tei out with it? To Ga? Rai Shu? Miao Yin?"

[There was something comic about the lack of concern here.]

"Ranma is outsider male, and has defeated Amazon womans in group combat. They no try to take you as prize now."

[Didn't they say in the series that the amazon law is roughly 'first come, first served' meaning since Shampoo was the first one to go after him she gets him? Unless that means that they'd need to be married.]

Ukyou started forward but was stopped by Shampoo. "Akane need do this herself.

She feel humiliated, useless, need to let frustrations out."

[Points: 1]

Other than the ...

[That's quite a list.]

That was _extremely_ funny. If it weren't for the bad grammar/punctuation/capitalization at the end I'd even put it in my favorites.

Wonderfully written. A very interesting take on the life of Ranma.

"...really big damn predator," finished the Jusenkyo Guide

He'd obviously chosen to approach the right

person now, because he was getting FOOD! (Always an important consideration.)

(Of course, if she had gotten a hernia she would have just

named it Rachel.)

"ACK! PHTHTHTH! Cat germs! I've been slobbered on! Ah! Doctor Tofu!

I've got cat germs! Somebody get some antiseptic. Ak! Pew! ICky!" - Stolen from Peanuts?

"Pot. Kettle. Apparent reflectivity index." Hephaestus grumbled.

LOL

Good ending and The omake scene was great!

i really liked your story but it kinda suck how u left it sorta hanging with ranma half dead half alive and then it get's really confusin when u read the part where he's maried to shampoo but besides that it's a kick ass story

(smirk at omake)

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(snicker)

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BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Oh, and I really liked the story, too!

I've been looking for a full version of This story since i read the preview for it. Now that i've read it, Its even better now. Two thumbs and a couple of toes up.

I like it! A really interesting story, i like how the story progressed. the characters were true to form (mostly), and i really liked the *new* Ranma. it was Different!

Hmmm... I still thinks it's a bit unclear as to weather he dies or not. And if he doesn't, who does he end up with? ;

I love is very good.

Good storie, nice and long, rather original with the sabre tooth. Ending was kinda weak though.

This is excellent work. *sigh* I've been waiting for a more conclusive ending to this story since it originally was proposed under the The Bet line of works. Personally, I would have preferred Ranma winding up with Kasumi, but I guess that in some respects, Shampoo is a fairly good choice.

The ending Omake was also well done. *grin* It had the flavor of some of the Cartoon Network shorts that have been recently been used as peudo-commercials.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ! That was so funny ! I can't believe that , that's definately one of my favorite altrenate reality Ranma Fanfics . That turned out really great . My comepliments