i love this! Star Wars and Star Trek are my favorite science fiction stories ever! I really hope you do a sequel sometime!

First of all, as a science fiction buff, I'm amazed at this. I love both the Trek and the Wars but this is brilliant. Q is just the greatest guy. All of the characters are so well done and I like that you've started it in the original trilogy.

Good story thus far, I liked the enterprise's fight to stay free. A criticism, some of the transitions are a little abrupt, try to put in some rulers or something.

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Master of teh Boot

Oh, I'm curious. Is there more? I really liked what you've written, Q is always handy for these things. Keep writing!

Love this story you put it together very well.

Much better. I think Deanna would be kind of fascinated, not fearful of Jedi powers, but actually Jedi powers are inborn; a muggle can't suddenly develop Jedi or other wizard/witch powers out of the blue.

It'd be neat if Beverly and Luke could meet; those two are a lot alike...both shy, quiet, sensitive, and reserved.

Hope to see more from you; it would be cool if the Star Wars characters (Han, Luke, Lando, and Leia mainly) wound up being on the Enterprise maybe thru some Q trickery and interacted more with all the TNG characters.

Aw this was really well done and I hope you decide to either continue it or write a sequel

EH

Yuck, this chapter and part of 5 was male-dominated and having the men "rescue" Deanna was a tad trite, esp. having Deanna just lie there helplessly and passively. Deanna may be laid back, but she is not some passive victim; I'd think she'd give Vader a few good groin chops and escape herself and maybe meet up with the other crew members in the Death Star exit.

I'd have Guinan in there and Bev also; how come Bev wasn't in this chapter? She might be afraid to come on board the Death Star, but I'd think somehow back in Sickbay, she'd play a role, maybe Luke would accidentally wind up in Sickbay and Bev would help him out there and then maybe they might wind up on the Death Star anyway and both of them maybe get Deanna back to the Enterprise.

And Deanna is certainly *NOT* weak-minded enough to be brainwashed or go off the deep end after a few hours in a cheap space station cell; she'd still be strong...shaken and scared, but still herself and not "brainwashed" or passing out helplessly in the guys' arms and having to be carried out like some helpless baby. Give her more credit here.

Also, there were a few cliches describing Deanna with the overuse of *beautiful* and all and she's really not "petite." True, she isn't tall or big, but she's no tiny shrimp either.

Hope to see more of both Beverly and Luke; they're swell interesting characters. I can totally see Han and Leia driving the crew nuts with their bickering also.

Hey, perhaps Guinan would put a scare into both Vader and the Emperor since she also has extraordinary powers.

Aww you done? Is it finished? oh well I hope not, keep it up this is VERY good


EH

I love this story it is so well written. Please keep up the goo work and update soon.

Great story hope to see more.

ok very short but good, keep it up and update soon

Interesting and amusing! Love how you have the Q play around with Vader; Vader sure deserves it!

I bet Deanna won't be any passive victim; I can see her fighting back and bewildering and overwhelming Bobba Fett.

I like the scene where the Enterprise crew is discussing the Death Star and Vader; they were so in character there; they were always good at intellectual discussions like this.

Hey, when will you have Luke, Leia, and Han in there? I'd love to see Luke and Beverly interact; those two are my favorite sci-fi characters of all time. I love how reserved and shy both Beverly and Luke are.

I had this thought also...maybe Data, Guinan, and Jean Luc would annoy Leia. And also the crew might meet Jabba the Hut, if he's still alive in your story, but not be put off by him; Leia would be shocked that esp. Beverly and Deanna would be so calm and UN-disgusted at the slimy Jabba.

Can't wait to read more on this crossover! Great story so far!

please keep updating and do it fast i cant stand the suspense

wow good chapter, hey you should make it so that they meet the Millennium Falcon as well with Han, Chewie, Luke and Obi-Wan

EH

um wow keep it up this is really good and update soon

EH