Generally, i can't stand stories in this format. So much so that i don't even read them.
But by god. This is amazing.*worship*

I...Am...Sorta...Speechless...

It was so...wow, i mean, i sorta say it coming, and at first i thought it was gonna be james, but then she mentioned teddy, so i thought it was gonna be him, but then it WAS James...

It was awesome, I sorta wanted to slap James across the face at some point, but I'm guessing that was your intention.

Anyway, enough of my rambling, keep up the good work,-JuicyPumpkin

Amazing! I usually dont like OC's but, this was just amazing. James and Ailene for me were the center of the whole story somehow. I was looking for a story about Scorpius and Albus only, but this was perfect.

I cant put into words how I liked the way you written this, even at the beggining it was a bit confusing for me to realise who was who.

You did a fabulous work here.

I do like the style of this. These two are great together, and I like the story you've told. I hate Lucius Malfoy in this. Hate him, hate him, hate him. Where was Narcissa?

this is kinda sappy but i absolutely enjoyed every bit of its sappy-ness. i do see the scorpious/albus pairing, though i would never have thought that up myself. you are very descriptive and an excellnt writer.

you rock!

bluepancakes13

Really nice! I like how I didn't know who was who and I had to try and figure it out. Stil, it was necesarry to confirm it at some point. Nicely excecuted!

Aww, I really liked it, it was awesome! D

Wow, this is so well written! I loved every part of it, though sometimes it got a little confusing.
I like the ending the best.

i lovE YOU! seriously this is amazing! don't quite get the italics bit... but its so cool! the ending is REALLY SWEET! LOVE IT!
plus ireland ftw.
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Wow. This was written so well and made my heart clench at times. Well done!

this was beautifully written and very cut and fluffy and some how sad at the sane time.

thanks xx

this is really good! any plans to continue it soon?

wow.

poor scorpius
love the story though.

it's coming along great.)