Whoa, I didn't realize you were the author of this story too! XD

Ahem, anyways, great chapter! It was very different and much more intense than the previous three! Though, it was very shocking.. >_>; Remington is so evil.. Aion did nothing to you! (well.. in this fanfic..)

The only problem I sorta see is that there isn't enough of Rosette and possibly Chrono into the fanfic? And howcome in the Chrono Crusade fanfiction archive, it says it's a Chrono x Aion, but your chapters say it's Chrono x Rosette? I'm.. >__>; show a little Rosette x Aion.. if it's okay.. >_>; i mean.. the end of the 2nd chapter and through the 3rd chapter hinted a little of Rosette x Aion.. D= You don't need to.. but.. that would be nice if you could add a little romance to them >_<; if it's okay with you..

Please update, though gruesome, it was very detailed and reminded me of the Higurashi series, or possibly Saw? I would like to see what happens next!

O_O Oh mi gosh... det ser sandelig ikke godt ud for dem... Stakkels Aion... upload næste kapitel så snart du kan... eller tideligere X3

Oh mygod…
What’s gonna happen!
Oh-no!
UPDATE SOON ONEGAI!

I gotta say.. What happened to Aion had really affected him…..
SO.. ZOMFG.. WANNA KNOW!

kakkoi story...
I'm curious... XD
love it...
so Aion is younger this time...
wah...
OKAY!!
back to reading!

Oh my... jeg er godt nok spændt på hvad der sker i næste kapitel... det er længe siden du har update til den her fic og den er så god X3 update så snart du kan okay? (^_^)

Damnit. I hate the men in black! -.-

don't let them hurt him!

Unødvendig egentlig. Det skulle ikke vært slike sykehus!

OMG one of my favourite characters are tortured!! Please update soon cuz I need to know what happened!

Stakkels Aion... jeg ved hvor ond han er i mangaen/animeen, men jeg får mere og mere ondt af ham når jeg læser din historie.

Jeg er da glad for at Chrono og Rosette ikke vil lade ham gå tilbage til det forfærdelige sted (^_^) det er synd for ham.
Nu skal vi bare have ham til at fortælle hvad der er sket.

Update snart :D

Nu fik jeg virkelig ondt af ham -_- stakkels Aion... jeg havde selv lyst til at trøste ham efter hans mareridt.
Skriv hurtigt videre okay? Jeg vil så gerne vide hvad der kommer til at ske (^_^) et super kapitel.