 kaNNa-Chan816 2009-10-16 . chapter 1i loved it and i loved the fact that their child was named asuma but how did shika die? |
 PrincessOli 2009-07-23 . chapter 1deep... |
 Social Darwinism 2009-05-25 . chapter 1Wow, you're making me teary eyed! Gawd, I loved each sentence! Mother, Bruise, and Raw were my favorite... |
 janirafey 2009-01-20 . chapter 1you're making me cry |
 YaoiLovr29 2009-01-19 . chapter 1That was beautiful and very well written. You had me crying when i read 'Mother'. Great job, Ja. |
 One More Tragedy 2009-01-19 . chapter 1It didn't make much sense to me since so many of them were out of order, but it was beautiful. Good job. |