i loved it and i loved the fact that their child was named asuma but how did shika die?

deep...

Wow, you're making me teary eyed! Gawd, I loved each sentence! Mother, Bruise, and Raw were my favorite...

you're making me cry

That was beautiful and very well written. You had me crying when i read 'Mother'. Great job, Ja.

It didn't make much sense to me since so many of them were out of order, but it was beautiful. Good job.