Oh that's just mean. Nothing much happens for ninety percent of the chapter and then BOOM! Sephiroth attacks Terra! Cliffhanger!

Terra vs Sephiroth?...Oh **.

Very interesting story so far, I can't wait to read the next chapter! I really love how you write the characters. The little fan in me really wanted to see how a conversation between Sephiroth and Kefka would turn out while I played the game and I was disappointed they didn't interact at all. You delivered that quite adequately. :D I also started to become a fan of Terra x Cloud while I played through their stories. Very nice progression.

Just a couple of things I noticed. I'm not sure how closely you're sticking to the events in Dissidia, but I noticed you had Firion telling Cloud to go off on his own instead of Cecil. Not sure if that was intentional but it didn't hurt the story at all. Also, I believe I read that the Cloud of Darkness addresses herself as "we," apparently because she considers her tentacles separate entities, or something to that extent. Very minor things I noticed while I was reading. :)

I eagerly wait for the next update!

It's supposed to be living, not leaving...

I knew I'd see a Dissidia story where by traveling with Cloud for a good stretch of time, Terra would wind up making an enemy of Sephiroth as well as Kefka. And here the silver swordsman shows her his pale, pointed face. Fight, Terra, fight him - kick that murdering bastard all the way back to Chaos's ugly feet! Or if you can't, at least make enough commotion to alert Cloud.

I'd been wondering, too, would it have (in Destiny Odyssey VII) given a more painful feeling of deja vu if Sephiroth had attacked Terra instead of Firion when he wanted to bait Cloud? We will see, won't we? Just, please, don't write Sephiroth to be the *worst* caliber of evil known to fan-writers, okay?

So Sephiroth finally meets Terra. I've been looking forward to this.

Oh no!

What a place to end it. Can't wait to see what's up next. :)

Yay an update! The ending was very interesting with the appearance of Sephiroth. I look forward to more developing between Cloud & Terra :) Keep up the great work!

uh oh... sephiroth and terra meet and cloud is not around... bad sign.

Well, so it begins. Terra finally meets Sephiroth, in Thamasa no less. I can't help but wonder what he wants to tell her. Great chapter. Keep it up.

YAY! Another chapter! Poor Terra though, now she has Sephy to put up with huh? Well I hope you update soon! I really want to see what happens! :D

AW! That is one EVIL cliffy! ARGH! But I really liked this chapter a lot! And well, we all get writer's block sometimes so it's all right that it took you a little bit to update here. Anyway, great chapter! And I cannot wait for more! ^_^

I hope you're feeling better. And awesome chapter, can't wait to see what Sephiroth has in store for them.

*Gasp* Is this gonna end up in a Sephy/Terry deathmatch? I doubt it...It'll probably be averted...But how? And why?

Why am I narrating my innermost thoughts?

Anyways, Imma be an egotist and take this as a 'happy birthday for yesterday'! Tee-hee!

... Oh, **! NOT AGAIN! O_O I was half expecting another impaling course of action...