awwwwww i love this story...cried my eyeballs out but it was worth the read.

love,

lover95

Omg this is so heartbraking but it's so good I was crying. It was great I definately think you should keep writing.

that almost made me cry jacob is a basterd in this story

poor bella. jacob was one jack* to kill bella. he deservrd to die. i understand that edward is going to kill him self. this song says that if your being abused tell someone. there's no reason that you shuldn't tell. don't die to pritect someone that's beating 's just wrond people. seiouly tell a trusted adult of friend that your being abused. you don't deserve to die.

no.2 sorry people i exadently sent the last one that girl is suchh a jacob lover she will attacked you if you make fun of jacob! she's a little cooko cooko. well,you did a great job writing this story!

omg i pity eddie jacob did deserve to die! i mean he killed bella! edward goes and kills himself anyway to see bella i think that was a little to far,but he would never die so i understnd that he is doing that. i promise i won't show this story to a extrem i mean X-TREM

OMG i absolutely loved this ! i literally have tears streaming down my face ! i love this song and just listening to the words make me so sad,, im really glad u wrote a songfic to this song ! i love it so much ! definately favorite-ing this !

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OH MY GOD! this made me want to cry!

It's so good! It's soo good i can't even explain it!