 AmazonWariorPrincess 2009-10-22 . chapter 1I'm reviewing. Obviously, I like! Nice job here! It's a shame you put this as complete. You could have a brilliant story if you kept going! But no matter. You've done a very nice job. :D |
 lttlbrat93 2009-03-01 . chapter 1wat thats it i feel like there should be more i want more
but i love it |
 dreaminGemini 2009-01-21 . chapter 1hey both Ryans are good to read. I know what you mean though, it's hard for me to decide if i like ryan as the shy but loving guy or the dude with evil eyes wanting to play with it new Chad toy.
hm...anyway, I really liked your fic, it was cute and fun to read. I liked the way Ryan was written because usually there's just way too much angst, you know. They do something naughty, chad's in denyal and Ryan's about ready to kill himself, but in your's Ryan knows what kind of person he is. I loved it. great job. |
 hot4edward 2009-01-21 . chapter 1I like! I hope there will be follow-up chapters (hint, hint). |
 oheygracey 2009-01-20 . chapter 1owwh-owwh! this was good. your "pushy and in lust" ryan is amazing. i can really see him being like this, especially in this situation. chad was, well, chad. not ooc, which surpised me. this was extremely well-written. i've never read your stuff before, but i definitely will now. =] absolutely loved it. short, and sweet. thanks so much for posting! |
 Ayla C. Raspus 2009-01-19 . chapter 1wow...
very good...
Lol definatly interesting. I actually see ryan as shy and in love...thats just me. and then he dances all his feeling away! lol
good good! |