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AmazonWariorPrincess
2009-10-22 . chapter 1
I'm reviewing. Obviously, I like! Nice job here! It's a shame you put this as complete. You could have a brilliant story if you kept going! But no matter. You've done a very nice job. :D
lttlbrat93
2009-03-01 . chapter 1
wat thats it i feel like there should be more i want more

but i love it
dreaminGemini
2009-01-21 . chapter 1
hey both Ryans are good to read. I know what you mean though, it's hard for me to decide if i like ryan as the shy but loving guy or the dude with evil eyes wanting to play with it new Chad toy.
hm...anyway, I really liked your fic, it was cute and fun to read. I liked the way Ryan was written because usually there's just way too much angst, you know. They do something naughty, chad's in denyal and Ryan's about ready to kill himself, but in your's Ryan knows what kind of person he is. I loved it. great job.
hot4edward
2009-01-21 . chapter 1
I like! I hope there will be follow-up chapters (hint, hint).
oheygracey
2009-01-20 . chapter 1
owwh-owwh! this was good. your "pushy and in lust" ryan is amazing. i can really see him being like this, especially in this situation. chad was, well, chad. not ooc, which surpised me. this was extremely well-written. i've never read your stuff before, but i definitely will now. =] absolutely loved it. short, and sweet. thanks so much for posting!
Ayla C. Raspus
2009-01-19 . chapter 1
wow...

very good...

Lol definatly interesting. I actually see ryan as shy and in love...thats just me. and then he dances all his feeling away! lol

good good!
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