 machi-tan 2009-10-14 . chapter 35omigosh I loved it but Im also upset that its over. ='( I cant wait to see the sequel. I wish it could have been a bit longer about how after she escaped, seems like it rushed together. But Im not insulting gyou amazing story. I hope you write the sequel. Loved the story! Keep writing!
machi-tan <3 |
 Da Baddest King 2009-10-14 . chapter 35Goodass story and you bet Da Baddest King's going to read your sequal, bout time that crazyass Karin got what she deserved. Anyways, good story in all and hope you continue doing what you do best, writ fics for eeryone to enjoy =]
Forever Da Baddest King |
 ex0 2009-10-14 . chapter 35One of the best Naru/Ino story i've read so far. I'm very eager to read the sequel you've made of this one, you can count on me, I'll be there ! I'm faithful to awesome writers like you ;D
kiwi-sama 4ever (Yeah big fan lol) |
 Minato-Mishima 2009-10-14 . chapter 35I cannot believe how amazing this story has been! Seriously, you have amazing talent! |
 1upHero 2009-10-13 . chapter 35Aww cute ending, I really like it. When you post up your new story send me a message, can't wait to hear from you! ^_^ |
 shyguy1818 2009-10-13 . chapter 35awsome |
 Saftey22 2009-09-27 . chapter 34your a great writer |
 Minato-Mishima 2009-09-21 . chapter 34LOL amazing chapter! The questions this time were tough but I came up with some answers. Question one. I think Choji will confess everything he knows to Ino's dad. Question two. I think Shin won't make it in time, but rather Karin will realize that she's a crazy bitch and stop trying to kill Ino. Question three. I think that when they figure it all out they will confront several people( including Naruto) of Ino's whereabouts, inadvertently tipping off Naruto that she's in danger. |
 Paul Namikaze 2009-09-21 . chapter 34hey great chapter here r my answers for the questions
1 maybe choji will tell inoichi that he has found another girl.
2 why do i hae the feeling that naruto will come in and save her
3 i have no idea
well can't wait till the next update
bye bye |
 Da Baddest King 2009-09-20 . chapter 34Lmfao i was really looking forward to see what u would think about my name changing, and goodass chapter! Omg that
b-i-t-c-h is crazy!!
1. Uh oh, Choji visited Inoichi, what is he planning on telling him? I really dont even know! It's just to much lmao pobablly that his daughter has disapeered.
2. Ino is battling Karin who has the upper hand, do you think Shin will be her hero to rescue her? Umm hm i think this is a trick question lmao so NO! Naruto will!...somehow...lmao
3. What do you suppose Shikamaru and the gang are planning to do when they put two and two together?
Again...im not even sure anymore...its just to many twist kiwi4me lmao, probablly find Ino somehow and Karin will eventually either die or go to jail =[ hope somehow this situation becomes like this:
Karin's about to kill Ino while she's choking and the gang and Naruto and Inoichi lke rushes in and Karin threatens 2 kill Ino and somehow eveyone calms down and omg let me stop is making me excited lmao
update Soon! |
 machi-tan 2009-09-20 . chapter 1I love the story and Im is suspence! Please write quick!
d(>.<)b |
 1upHero 2009-09-20 . chapter 34Awesome chapter! Don't listen to XP Gamer, he doesn't know what he's talking about =)!
1.About Ino presumably.
2.I'd Karin because of the blade. But it seems like Shin will definitely work his way in to play the hero.
3.A raid?
Short and strange answers for you, sorry ^_^ |
 deathravenrasengan 2009-09-20 . chapter 34question:
1. Uh oh, Choji visited Inoichi, what is he planning on telling him? Like I said a few chapters back, he knows something. And it's about Ino. He's gonna tell Inoichi something concerning Ino's location or what happened to her.
2. Ino is battling Karin who has the upper hand, do you think Shin will be her hero to rescue her? After probably having a short verbal fight with Karin, he'll rescue her. :D It would be awesome if Shin told Karin "Shut up biatch!" and bitch-slapped the hell outta her. xD
3. What do you suppose Shikamaru and the gang are planning to do when they put two and two together? (I should've waited for the next chapter... oh well lol) Eh, as I really didn't understand this question, my answer could be bad so...Hm... What will they plan? Take action or just wait.
Sorry I didn't answer last chapter's questions, I actually forgot to do it.lol. But hey, better late than never eh?
~deathravenrasengan~ |
 ex0 2009-09-20 . chapter 34Yahoo, another chapter's there ! The awesomeness is back :p
Seriously, it is as good as the other ones, that suspense is freaking killing me xD
Please Ino, survive, Karin ... er... kill yourself? LOL
I'm looking forward the next one ! Keep up the good work, you're the best Kiwi-sama ! |
 XPGamer 2009-09-16 . chapter 33so i read this whole story up till this chapter against my better judgement since it has nothing to do with the actual Naruto story i.e ninjas, elemental nations etc.
It really makes no sense for Naruto to try as hard as he does to be with Ino, he gets nothing but hurt for a girl that apparently loves...what was it? 2 other guys as well as him even though the feelings for him are just 'like' and not to mention Chouji who just appeared again...
It's very confusing, the chapters are really short and... theres to much back and forth to really appreciate this story |