Great fic!

So very different, their reactions, yet they both ring true. I'm a bit speechless at the moment, but well done!

Phantom Jedi

I loved the parellels and the stark contrast you struck between Anakin and Luke's reactions. On one hand they had some of the same thoughts, and on the other they had opposing worries and plans that almost makes one laugh. I'm partial to Luke's side here; not many choose to do his thoughts on his impending fatherhood, I think most just don't pay any attention to it because it wasn't in the movies. It's a shame really, but at least you've nailed his character and thoughts right on the head.

A sweet double shot. It was interesting to see how the two Skywalker men thought of their futures. Kudoes.