Squee! I love this couple, and don't think it's too sappy at all. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Hope Saionji can save him from Akio. Update soon. ^_^

I have to say this chapter was an improvement. You were descriptive without being too flowery. Some sentences were a little choppy, but otherwise it was great. Keep it up.

Yay ^_^ I've been wondering when this would be updated again. Great chapter. Enjoyed it a lot. Nice and long. Can't wait for the next update! Good luck in Bio! Ebil teacher...

Don't worry about mistakes. You can always come back and edit them. It's a good rough draft, and the lemon was hot. Poor Touga and Saionji had to deal with Nanami, hee hee. ^_^

"Look it up on Youtube..."

I cracked up at this, lol. xD And hooray for yaoi smex scenes! I look forward to more of those, hehehehe. Good chapter.

I knew Touga wouldn't give up on their relationship so easily, but why would Akio flirt with Saionji too? This was pretty good, although I'd get rid of that first "Because I love you" and stick with either first or third person. (Yes, I read the author's note.) Keep it up. ^_^

Crap, no theesome. >_< Oh, well. Pretty good all the same. Update again soon.

Pretty good ^^ I'm curious to see how this is going to go. Do I smell a threesome? Heheheheheh. Moar pleez nao x3

Aww, poor Saionji! Akio is so cruel. I'm guessing he's after one or the other, and both guys have a misunderstanding. By the way, did I spot an Utena Abridged reference? XD Keep it up.

Squee! I just love Touga/Saionji. Don't keep me in suspense;I want to know why Touga seems so distant. ^_^