This is one of the first LE/SS fics I've read...and I think I may be a fan of this pairing. This fic was really sweet, and just...really good. :D

Too damn brilliant!!

~that was amazing.

:)

That was excellent. The descriptions of the actions and facial expressions were so vivid.

Ah. Snape.

I'd like to see his character more fleshed out; because while his friendship with Lily was his salvation, his life was so much more, his personality not a bit less nasty.

I like the way you've written it, the barrier between the two; but is Severus really a different person when he's with Lily? Totally?

Perfection. That's all I can say in regards to this.

That was lovely, so realistically written. I especially loved the ending, when he tried to ask her not to regret it. Beautiful story :)

Deliciously vague-every moment in this story where I want more to happen, it's quickly closed off by the author. It's very neat and well-written, but slightly...unfulfilling. Don't get me wrong--that usually means it's canon. :)