Ooooohhh! I liked it a lot! I was very happy that Vegeta was the seme! He doesn't have an uke personality. But great work!

And chi chi and Bulma never knew...

Cool I'm a huge yaoi fan! Especially goku x vegeta you get points from me)

You should continue writing these. It was great! I loved it!

Wish you luck on your writing.
Love

Ash x3

Hawt.

Oh Vegeta, you horny beast. Tehe, at the end everyone wins, well except for Goku but you get the point :D. Me likey

Oh my I loved this; very fun!

I like this couple.

Hot lemon.

Kisses from Argentina!

Hot good lemon!

Liked the cute humorous lines at the end too)

HEE HEE HEE! that was great!_

that was GREAT! THAT NEEDS TO BE RATED Romance/Humor. IT WWAS FUNNY!

This was hot and hilarious lol.

*licks her lips* Yummy... But the lemon is not long enough. For a fast reader like me, I read this in less than five minutes, and all the juicy parts are gone too fast once read. You shoul apply more detail to it, so that those who will read your lemons will savor them so much that they'll need a very cold shower. At least, that's what I would do, to keep my audience entranced. If your lemons are too short, you may get a review, but there's a possibility that some readers will drop out.
Anyway, nice start

Kami, that was hot!

I wish I could go shopping for apples with Vegeta
Expertly written.

Enjoyed every second reading it.

Ooh...how yummy! Great little oneshot! Very hot...