/Tears
I was not previously aware that this side story of sorts to "Tim and Again" existed. Very well written, and emotional to boot!

This almost made me cry, and is made all the sadder by the fact that 'Here And Now' appears to be a dead fic.

Thats a very well written scene! Makes me glad that Naruto went back in time and realised it, else it's just too sad (

Thank you for writing this. You did very well

that was so sad, but really well written, i've been debating back and forth if i wanted to read 'Time and Again', the sheer length of the story intrigued me, but i'm a NaruHina freak, and despite my trying to be open minded i've never really liked seeing Naruto with anyone other then hina-chan, it just seems weird to me, but there are a spare few stories that deviate from my preferred couple and i've actually liked, but they were really good, and then there are those few that are just so GOOD as a tragedy i just can't say 'no' to them, this is one of them, though since i know 'time and again' is a time-travel fic, it makes me wonder if this is one of those things Naruto is trying to 'fix', when he goes all Deus Ex Machina on the world...

either way, i love this, its written nicely, and has that heavy tragedy that just drags you down, in an oddly 'good' way, and makes me wanna read its parent fic...

Till next *Salute-waves* Sayounara!

-Ikasury

Nicely done! KyLewin was right to place his faith in you and let you write this, it was fantastically detailed and gave clear insight to Hinata's state of mind.

Aw...it's so sad, what a crappy way for it all to pan out! You really made me feel for Hinata in this story, the lack of happy ending is soo painful!

That was really well done. You captured adult Hinata perfectly. I can still see traces of the shy little girl that fainted around Naruto in her, but she's a lot more than that now. She's smart and confident enough to know that Naruto would have married her instantly to save her from the arranged marriage, but still *Hinata* enough to "spare" the boy she loved. Oh Hinata...

That was amazing! KyLewin gave everyone a heads up about your story, and I thought, since I'v been following his stories pretty loyally, I'd check this out. I'm glad I did, this is really good and it follows the flashback quite Bravo!

Sad :(

and amazing!

This was a beautifully written story! I loved it so much, it was incredible and elegant, and the kind of story Hinata deserves! It is so sad that it ends that way, but I love it! You did a great job taking what KyLewin had started and finishing it wonderfully! Wow i just don't know what else to say! Great job! You are a fabulous writer!

As a reader of Time and Again from almost the beginning, this piece is beautiful. It nearly brought me to tears. You've really captured the characters' personalities and feelings perfectly here. I also liked the Moon theme, very compelling.

I commend you. 10/10 Two thumbs up: d()b

Depressing, but in a way I view it as being pretty realistic. The Hinata in this fiction is too spineless to ever have gotten her "true love" and all that. It's sad how her kindness was so great that she sacrificed her future, but a person that isn't willing to work for her happiness doesn't truly deserve it in my opinion. That's why I find the Hinata in Time and Again a bit depressing since Naruto is the one pushing Hinata all the time, rarely do I see her have any self-respect and self-confidence to try for what she wants. But then again I'm only in the early parts of the story. All the depressing story aside, it was well written with nice understanding of the emotional aspects of Hinata's actions.

Ah, this was lovely. I really enjoyed this scene from Hinata's POV. It offers a whole new level to it. Great job.

Wow *sniff* so sad, but very good. I mean it was sad when I read about it in Time and Again, but seeing it from Hinata's perspective is even sadder. If only she could have just been selfish, but then, Hinata would never be the type to do that and I think you've captured that well.