This is really good! I'm surprised you havn't gotten more reviews. Everyone is completely in character, especially Kadaj. And your English actually doesn't suck; it's better than that in many fics.
Good work!

Very well written, but very dark. Especially the torture scenes. Really brings out the madness of Sephiroth and teh Remnants in this. You might want to rasie the rating on this, but it's up to you. As it is, intriguing. Vincent was exceptionally well written.

regards Skykhanhunter