Yet another amazing story...Now I'm anxiously waiting for two updates! As much as I want more I will wait so I can enjoy it better. Keep up the AMAZING work!
This is so beautifully sad. Although I wished you warned before hand a bit more. Little bit of mood whiplash for me... Although I have this sinking feeling that you DID put a warning up but I was to impatient to read because your stories are AMAZING. I love your characterizations, and the look into Axel, the rapists, mind was refreshing and so sad. It made me tear up when Axel saw Roxas afterwards. I can't wait for your next update.
I finished this quite a while back and just happened to stumble across it again. I read and reread the summery, thinking 'i could have SWORN I've heard of thIs before...' before I decided to click on the title and see if I could remember what it was about. When I read a few sentences, I had a little spaz moment and I was like 'OHMYGODILOOOOOVETHISSTORY! WHY THE HELL ISN'T IT ONE OF MY FAVORITES!' So I'm going to change that right now I love you, I love your writing, and god dammit, FB deserves way more reviews then it has.
I'm currently loving this and Perfect Match after getting put onto you by a friend, and yeah... wow!
I'm not sure about whether I'm going to keep reading this one though... I mean, seriously, if this had happened to a friend of mine I would force them to go to the police and make sure the horrible person who raped them never came near them again.
And since this is AkuRoku and all, I'm assuming they're going to be getting back together... which is seriously wrong, even if Axel's sorry.
Oh... Oh my god. That was... Holy shit, you know how to leave a girl speechless. So far I've only read this and Perfect Match, but your stories are addictive. They're absolutly entrancing.
This was filled with so much emotion. I just... Oh god, you're one of the best authors on here, by far. I love it.
Once again, you've given us a window into Axel's mind, you show his anxiety wonderfully. I'm so glad Roxas came to the cafe, it made me laugh when he suddenly appeared after Axel had shouted :D I really look forward to reading the rest. I hope college and stuff aren't killing you, I know college is seriously wearing me out. I am really loving this story and am eager to find out what's going to happen with Axel and Roxas' relationship, and also Reno. I feel so sorry for the little darling!
Not satisfied! Oh, Beutelmaus! Don't be silly. This chapter was heart wrenching, beautiful and made me say 'naaawwww'. Axel's thoughts and feelings were portrayed wonderfully, you really let the reader see inside his mind.)
I really dont often review chapter by chapter. I tend to read everything then review, but I had to let you know that Reno was adorable. The little toddler had to deal with so much and was so cute, I felt my eyes fill with tears. Especially with the way the two redheads interacted. Beautiful x
oooh, I'm hooked! lol. I love Roxas playing the more feminine role, Axel buying him a drink at first and then asking to be walked home. And yet, he turns around and becomes the more aggressive of the two, sexy and sultry, iniciating the kiss and purring things inot Axel's ear. I know it's only been 2 chapters, but you already has me wanting to read more!)
Your portrayal of Axel has already got me intruiged. I look forward to finding out more about him, his past says he was a wild child, but he's very interesting ... quiet, intelligent and keeps people at arms length. I am excited to see if and how Roxas will be able to break down the defensive walls and show the readers the real Axel.
It took me half the night to read this and my eyes are sobbing from the bright screen, but If this were a book I wouldn't put it down for the end of the world! I hope you update soon, I want to hear the rest of the story!
Family Bonds. This story isn't even complete yet and from what i've read so far it is just...wow. Absolutely beautiful, fantastic, amazing, and just, well...wow. I'm very impressed because I was going back and forth on whether or not I wanted to read this and I am so glad I decided to do so. This is the first fic i've read from your collection and personally, I think you have a wonderful talent for writing.
I will admit I cannot get enough of three-year-old Reno. His relationship with Axel is so adorable. And oh my gosh, let's not forget the relationship between Roxas and Axel...such angst, yet very addictive. Heck, your writing is just plain addicting. I mean, I read about the first ten chapters on my Wii when I had a free night, and let me tell ya, it isn't easy reading off of your television since neither of your computers are working and you have to resort to using the internet on the Wii. I had quite the headache afterwards, but this story was totally worth it.
Also, thank you for taking the time to write Family Bonds. I really do enjoy reading it. And I hope in the near future you'll be able to update some more chapters. And I am definitely checking out more of your stories from the ones you have and hopefully the ones to come.
oh wow, you're amazingly good at writing these stories. First, perfect match had me captivated, so much so I re-read it 5 times so far, and now I discover more of your brilliance! This is a great story, and it turned in a way I didn't expect! You are really good at writing out intense moments and pure anguish, it makes me so speechless each time I read one of your stories. Perfect match had me choked up the last 10 or so chapters, and this one surprised me so much. I ever thought Axel would rape him, or for Roxas to ever forgive him. This is a great story, and I'm quite excited to see how this one plays out. Thanks for the story and hope to read more
is the sadness over? the sadness is so magnificently portrayed but my heart aches for the two of them! i love this story so much it's beyond words. i'm looking forward to seeing some patching up here, seeing as how that's where they're headed. god, this story is so emotional. i love it. ha ha.